Thursday, December 18, 2014
Greenery Day, Day 27
In the end Ranma decided that losing his virginity had been so fantastic that he wanted to do it again right away. So for the next four days he took no chances, and played the scene with Nabiki following precisely the same script. Except at the end, when he made sure he was kissing her as she came in order to avoid interruptions by her sisters.
Afterward, he would pass the rest of the day trying to make plans for how to go further with Kasumi, or how to get into Akane's pants at all. Except he was coming up a bit dry on anything he thought might be workable. So he figured he'd just try experimenting and see what happened.
Thus on the fifth day after losing his virginity, he tried to do a variation on the shaving scenario with Akane. This got him nowhere. The girl merely redirected him (or her as she was at the time) to her sister Nabiki, and somehow he wasn't able to get things back on track to fuck the middle sister that day.
He wondered if Akane might open up a bit more if they were alone in the furo without her sisters present, so he tried reworking the whole “I'm really a girl, cursed to turn into a boy” set up in a way to get Akane to bathe alone with “her.” This failed the first day, got him alone in the bathing room with her the second day, which was nice enough for getting another look at the girl, but didn't make any progress toward the naughty stuff.
Then he thought he'd try a variation on his explanation of the curse.
Afterward, he would pass the rest of the day trying to make plans for how to go further with Kasumi, or how to get into Akane's pants at all. Except he was coming up a bit dry on anything he thought might be workable. So he figured he'd just try experimenting and see what happened.
Thus on the fifth day after losing his virginity, he tried to do a variation on the shaving scenario with Akane. This got him nowhere. The girl merely redirected him (or her as she was at the time) to her sister Nabiki, and somehow he wasn't able to get things back on track to fuck the middle sister that day.
He wondered if Akane might open up a bit more if they were alone in the furo without her sisters present, so he tried reworking the whole “I'm really a girl, cursed to turn into a boy” set up in a way to get Akane to bathe alone with “her.” This failed the first day, got him alone in the bathing room with her the second day, which was nice enough for getting another look at the girl, but didn't make any progress toward the naughty stuff.
Then he thought he'd try a variation on his explanation of the curse.
Wednesday, December 17, 2014
GD 8 scene 1
I've completed the rough draft of the first scene of the next chapter in Greenery Day. I'll post it here once I've polished it up a bit.
Ranma comes up with a plan to get into Akane's pants.
Ranma comes up with a plan to get into Akane's pants.
Monday, December 15, 2014
Review from Anon on AFF
Quoting a review for Greenery Day on AdultFanFiction:
Size does not matter to a degree considering location of nerves. Too large is usually too painful though, because hitting the cervix is not pleasant from what I have read in medical journals. A number of guys have difficulty controlling themselves especially in climax so the ones who are too large can hurt a girl and leave a bad impression. If it was the girl’s first time it is far from impossible that she will develop trauma.
... the hell? Sir, are you aware that you were reading porn? You know, where it's not uncommon for authors to have men with baseball bat sized dicks screwing virgins and have them screaming in delight? Or was the problem that I only made him bigger than average instead of being hung like The Incredible Hulk, and therefore you expected something realistic to the point it could be printed in a medical journal?
I'm shaking my head over somebody worrying about details like this while reading such a story, instead of fapping like a normal person.
Size does not matter to a degree considering location of nerves. Too large is usually too painful though, because hitting the cervix is not pleasant from what I have read in medical journals. A number of guys have difficulty controlling themselves especially in climax so the ones who are too large can hurt a girl and leave a bad impression. If it was the girl’s first time it is far from impossible that she will develop trauma.
... the hell? Sir, are you aware that you were reading porn? You know, where it's not uncommon for authors to have men with baseball bat sized dicks screwing virgins and have them screaming in delight? Or was the problem that I only made him bigger than average instead of being hung like The Incredible Hulk, and therefore you expected something realistic to the point it could be printed in a medical journal?
I'm shaking my head over somebody worrying about details like this while reading such a story, instead of fapping like a normal person.
Sunday, December 14, 2014
GD and Kodachi
Christmas is keeping me busy.
I have an idea for the next chapter of Greenery Day that might bring Ranma into contact with Kodachi. If so, I'm thinking she might react as in the manga to paralyze him, and steal some kisses. Except there won't be anyone to interrupt, so she actually will get the kisses. However Ranma will get frustrated and turn it around on her the next day.
Still, I've been taking a lighter approach with GD than with MV, so I'll probably avoid outright noncon. Most likely have him get Kodachi really hot, and then see where it goes from there.
I have an idea for the next chapter of Greenery Day that might bring Ranma into contact with Kodachi. If so, I'm thinking she might react as in the manga to paralyze him, and steal some kisses. Except there won't be anyone to interrupt, so she actually will get the kisses. However Ranma will get frustrated and turn it around on her the next day.
Still, I've been taking a lighter approach with GD than with MV, so I'll probably avoid outright noncon. Most likely have him get Kodachi really hot, and then see where it goes from there.
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