The results of the magical item poll suggest that the item a normal guy at Furinkan would most want to get his hands on for perverted purposes are kairaishi mushrooms, with 35/54 (64%) of those voting. These are the mushrooms which can force the eater to obey one specific command which is tied to an auditory stimulus, until the effect wears off.
A very distant second, with well less than half as many votes (14/54 = 25%) was a fishing pole of love, a device which could allow one to cause another person to fall in love with oneself, potentially forever. Although it is initially reversible if one can get hold of the fishing pole in time.
And in third place with 10/54 (18%) of the votes were the magic paper dolls, which can cause people to obey commands written on the dolls when those dolls are placed on a person's back.
From there it trailed downward with the love pill bracelet (9 votes), the wishbringer sword or sleeping powder or gas (8 votes each), instant Nyanniichuan powder (7 votes), the magical compact or paralysis powder or gas (5 votes each), the pail of preservation, lenses of invincibility, or the umbrella of love (4 votes apiece), some mushrooms of time or incense of spring sleep (3 votes each). In last place with one vote apiece were the reversal jewel or some super soba.
Monday, August 29, 2016
Friday, August 19, 2016
Break
Got some things going on right now that are taking my attention. It will probably be at least a week before I can get back into things here, maybe more. (Hopefully not as long as my last hiatus.)
Sunday, August 14, 2016
Magical Item Poll
The poll question is “Which of the following items would a perverted sly male student at Furinkan wish to have?” The idea here is that we are talking about a male student who is perverted, reasonably intelligent (not idiots like canon Kuno or Gosunkugi who will screw it up), and fairly normal (not a highly powered martial artist). The poll is set up for approval voting - you may vote for multiple items which you think would be most applicable.
The following is a brief review of the items in question. In all cases assume that the person in possession only has a limited supply of the item.
Instant Nyanniichuan. Powder which when added to water produces a temporary spring of drowned girl; i.e., it gives a male a temporary curse like Ranma's.
Paralysis powder/gas. Gas to inhale or powder to put in food or water which induces temporary paralysis in the victim. The person is conscious, but cannot move or speak.
Sleeping powder/gas. Gas to inhale or powder to put in food or water which induces temporary sleep from which the victim cannot be awakened.
Spring sleep incense. Similar to the previous, an incense which when breathed induces sleep from which the victim cannot be awakened until reacting to smells associated with summer. Warning: the victim though asleep will act out her or his dreams.
Love pill bracelet. A bracelet containing three pills which make the swallower fall in love with the first person seen of the opposite gender, with durations of one minute, one day, or one's lifetime. Assume that the possessor knows which pill is which.
Kairaishi mushrooms. When eaten by the victim, the first command which is given and associated with a sound, such as a clap or bell ringing, will cause the victim to obey that command every time she or he hears the sound until the effect wears off.
Super soba. When consumed (presumably by the possessor) one gains super strength, until the antidote is swallowed. Warning: the one affected will also grow cat whiskers.
Wishbringer sword. The possessor is granted three wishes, although the magic appears to be restricted to small things or events which can be made to appear as natural occurrences.
Magic paper dolls. Paper figures on which one may write a command. When placed on a person's back, the person must obey the command. The need to obey the command seems to end after the doll is removed. The possessor may only possess a limited number, around a dozen.
Reversal jewel. The person wearing the jewel will either express their feelings associated with romance and love in abundance, when worn in the upright position, or will express the opposite of those feelings when worn in the reversed position.
Fishing pole of love. Whoever is struck with the suction cup on the end of the fishing line will gradually fall in love with the caster, as the mark of a carp grows where struck. The antidote is to be struck with the suction cup a second time, so that it pulls the carp mark off.
Pail of preservation. When a Jusenkyo cursed individual is splashed with water from this pail, his or her curse is locked until splashed with water from the kettle of liberation.
Invincibility lenses. Whoever looks upon the person wearing the lenses of invincibility is forced to grovel, cry and apologize to the wearer.
Umbrella of love. Any two people who stand simultaneously under this umbrella will temporarily fall in love, at least while under the umbrella, even if they are of the same gender.
Mushrooms of time. Anyone eating one of these mushrooms will change to an age determined by the height of the mushroom - e.g., consuming a mushroom 12 cm tall will change one to age 12. Assume the possessor is growing the mushrooms, so can choose the desired height.
Magical compact. This appeared in the arc in which mirror images of Ranma came out of an enchanted mirror. It is a compact which when opened shows a small mirror, and anyone who gazes into that mirror is sucked into a moderately sized spherical room (essentially a prison cell) until someone holds the compact upside-down and shakes them out.
The following is a brief review of the items in question. In all cases assume that the person in possession only has a limited supply of the item.
Instant Nyanniichuan. Powder which when added to water produces a temporary spring of drowned girl; i.e., it gives a male a temporary curse like Ranma's.
Paralysis powder/gas. Gas to inhale or powder to put in food or water which induces temporary paralysis in the victim. The person is conscious, but cannot move or speak.
Sleeping powder/gas. Gas to inhale or powder to put in food or water which induces temporary sleep from which the victim cannot be awakened.
Spring sleep incense. Similar to the previous, an incense which when breathed induces sleep from which the victim cannot be awakened until reacting to smells associated with summer. Warning: the victim though asleep will act out her or his dreams.
Love pill bracelet. A bracelet containing three pills which make the swallower fall in love with the first person seen of the opposite gender, with durations of one minute, one day, or one's lifetime. Assume that the possessor knows which pill is which.
Kairaishi mushrooms. When eaten by the victim, the first command which is given and associated with a sound, such as a clap or bell ringing, will cause the victim to obey that command every time she or he hears the sound until the effect wears off.
Super soba. When consumed (presumably by the possessor) one gains super strength, until the antidote is swallowed. Warning: the one affected will also grow cat whiskers.
Wishbringer sword. The possessor is granted three wishes, although the magic appears to be restricted to small things or events which can be made to appear as natural occurrences.
Magic paper dolls. Paper figures on which one may write a command. When placed on a person's back, the person must obey the command. The need to obey the command seems to end after the doll is removed. The possessor may only possess a limited number, around a dozen.
Reversal jewel. The person wearing the jewel will either express their feelings associated with romance and love in abundance, when worn in the upright position, or will express the opposite of those feelings when worn in the reversed position.
Fishing pole of love. Whoever is struck with the suction cup on the end of the fishing line will gradually fall in love with the caster, as the mark of a carp grows where struck. The antidote is to be struck with the suction cup a second time, so that it pulls the carp mark off.
Pail of preservation. When a Jusenkyo cursed individual is splashed with water from this pail, his or her curse is locked until splashed with water from the kettle of liberation.
Invincibility lenses. Whoever looks upon the person wearing the lenses of invincibility is forced to grovel, cry and apologize to the wearer.
Umbrella of love. Any two people who stand simultaneously under this umbrella will temporarily fall in love, at least while under the umbrella, even if they are of the same gender.
Mushrooms of time. Anyone eating one of these mushrooms will change to an age determined by the height of the mushroom - e.g., consuming a mushroom 12 cm tall will change one to age 12. Assume the possessor is growing the mushrooms, so can choose the desired height.
Magical compact. This appeared in the arc in which mirror images of Ranma came out of an enchanted mirror. It is a compact which when opened shows a small mirror, and anyone who gazes into that mirror is sucked into a moderately sized spherical room (essentially a prison cell) until someone holds the compact upside-down and shakes them out.
Thursday, August 11, 2016
The Ultimate Teacher, part 2
You should read part 1 first. Warning: There is extreme S&M and nonconsensual sex in this one, with the former in part 1 and the latter in part 2.
After a hurried discussion in the locker room, and a quick check that all of the girls — and more importantly, the crazy teacher — had indeed gone outside, the boys of class 1-F crept back upstairs. Opening the door quietly, a couple of them peeked inside to check that the room was exactly as it had been left. The room was a little dim, what with the lights off and an overcast day, but there was still plenty of light with which to see. Nothing was out of place, and the room was quiet, the five girls at the front apparently having stopped crying and choosing to remain silent.
After a hurried discussion, a protesting Hikaru Gosunkugi was pushed into the classroom. Even with a promised reward, the terror of being recognized by any of these girls before he could complete his task nearly made him wet his pants. Making sure to keep his face averted from the five, he slipped quietly up near the front of the room, and looked into the last box their new teacher had opened.
Finding what he sought, Hikaru lifted out five pieces of leather. Moving up behind Shampoo, he quickly placed the blindfold over her eyes, and continued to keep his face averted while buckling it in place behind her head. As expected, Shampoo cried out at this fresh indignity, and Hikaru prayed that the others would not recognize him when they looked over to discover the cause of this sound.
Moving as rapidly as possible, Hikaru had soon blindfolded all five of the girls. He then motioned to the boys at the door. All of the other boys from the class entered the room, the last one in closing the door again behind himself. None of them spoke, hoping that in the absence of voice recognition the girls would lack absolute certainty regarding their identities.
After a hurried discussion in the locker room, and a quick check that all of the girls — and more importantly, the crazy teacher — had indeed gone outside, the boys of class 1-F crept back upstairs. Opening the door quietly, a couple of them peeked inside to check that the room was exactly as it had been left. The room was a little dim, what with the lights off and an overcast day, but there was still plenty of light with which to see. Nothing was out of place, and the room was quiet, the five girls at the front apparently having stopped crying and choosing to remain silent.
After a hurried discussion, a protesting Hikaru Gosunkugi was pushed into the classroom. Even with a promised reward, the terror of being recognized by any of these girls before he could complete his task nearly made him wet his pants. Making sure to keep his face averted from the five, he slipped quietly up near the front of the room, and looked into the last box their new teacher had opened.
Finding what he sought, Hikaru lifted out five pieces of leather. Moving up behind Shampoo, he quickly placed the blindfold over her eyes, and continued to keep his face averted while buckling it in place behind her head. As expected, Shampoo cried out at this fresh indignity, and Hikaru prayed that the others would not recognize him when they looked over to discover the cause of this sound.
Moving as rapidly as possible, Hikaru had soon blindfolded all five of the girls. He then motioned to the boys at the door. All of the other boys from the class entered the room, the last one in closing the door again behind himself. None of them spoke, hoping that in the absence of voice recognition the girls would lack absolute certainty regarding their identities.
The Ultimate Teacher, part 1
Warning: There is extreme S&M and nonconsensual sex in this one, with the former in part 1 and the latter in part 2.
Principal Kuno of Furinkan High School sat facing the chair on the other side of the desk in his office. A vicious smile curved his mouth and there was a gleam in his eye. In the chair sat a little brown teddy bear.
“When I hear you conquer three school full o' delinquents an' da kine,” the principal said to the bear, “I'm pullin' every string to bring you here! So you got just one mission here ... to crush Ranma Saotome!” The man burst out into maniacal laughter.
Then he leaned back and wiped his forehead. “Okay. Dat's forty-five rehearsals. I wish dat Ninomiya would show up.”
Outside in the schoolyard a young girl no one had seen before was walking toward the school. In appearance, she belonged in elementary school, or perhaps very early middle school. There was a great deal of chatter among the students in the yard wondering what she was doing here at the high school. Most of the talk broke up when she approached Ranma's friends Hiroshi and Daisuke.
“Um ... 'scuse me?” she said to the pair.
Hiroshi smiled at the tyke and asked, “What can we do for ya?”
Her own face lit up and she cheerfully requested, “Can you take me to the principal's office?”
Principal Kuno of Furinkan High School sat facing the chair on the other side of the desk in his office. A vicious smile curved his mouth and there was a gleam in his eye. In the chair sat a little brown teddy bear.
“When I hear you conquer three school full o' delinquents an' da kine,” the principal said to the bear, “I'm pullin' every string to bring you here! So you got just one mission here ... to crush Ranma Saotome!” The man burst out into maniacal laughter.
Then he leaned back and wiped his forehead. “Okay. Dat's forty-five rehearsals. I wish dat Ninomiya would show up.”
Outside in the schoolyard a young girl no one had seen before was walking toward the school. In appearance, she belonged in elementary school, or perhaps very early middle school. There was a great deal of chatter among the students in the yard wondering what she was doing here at the high school. Most of the talk broke up when she approached Ranma's friends Hiroshi and Daisuke.
“Um ... 'scuse me?” she said to the pair.
Hiroshi smiled at the tyke and asked, “What can we do for ya?”
Her own face lit up and she cheerfully requested, “Can you take me to the principal's office?”
ENE Scene 10 Done
I've just finished the first draft of the next scene for Erotic Nerima Encounters. This one involves more than one girl, and there will be sexual acts - unlike Angry Bush, which was mainly restricted to humiliation. Warning, there is definite nonconsensual sex in this upcoming one.
Sunday, August 7, 2016
Angry Bush
“Ranma!” The members of the Tendo household had rarely heard Ranma's father Genma shout so loudly, even at his angriest. “Why do you hate me so?!”
The two men, father and son, came charging down the stairs, through the family room, and out to the engawa. For some reason Ranma's face was striped with a multitude of long scratches.
Ranma turned and shouted over his shoulder. “This stuff is dangerous! I'm giving it back!”
Nabiki sighed while standing by the table in her pajamas, as her father watched the goings on from over the top of his newspaper. Shaking her head, Nabiki realized that Ranma must have stolen the bottle of experimental hair tonic from his father, the one which made the man's bald head grow towering steel hard spikes of hair whenever he became angry, which promptly fell out again as soon as he cheered up. Compared to the usual weird happenings around the Saotomes, this barely rated mention.
Outside, Akane was just coming in through the gate, returning from her early morning jog. She too saw the chase, and dismissed it as nothing out of the ordinary. Closing the gate behind her, she turned back again to head into the house.
At that moment Genma grabbed a large can of oil standing beside the engawa, and tossed the contents forward around Ranma's feet. The young man's legs shot out from under him and he somersaulted through the air. The bottle of hair tonic flew out of his hand, describing a high arc, then came back down.
The two men, father and son, came charging down the stairs, through the family room, and out to the engawa. For some reason Ranma's face was striped with a multitude of long scratches.
Ranma turned and shouted over his shoulder. “This stuff is dangerous! I'm giving it back!”
Nabiki sighed while standing by the table in her pajamas, as her father watched the goings on from over the top of his newspaper. Shaking her head, Nabiki realized that Ranma must have stolen the bottle of experimental hair tonic from his father, the one which made the man's bald head grow towering steel hard spikes of hair whenever he became angry, which promptly fell out again as soon as he cheered up. Compared to the usual weird happenings around the Saotomes, this barely rated mention.
Outside, Akane was just coming in through the gate, returning from her early morning jog. She too saw the chase, and dismissed it as nothing out of the ordinary. Closing the gate behind her, she turned back again to head into the house.
At that moment Genma grabbed a large can of oil standing beside the engawa, and tossed the contents forward around Ranma's feet. The young man's legs shot out from under him and he somersaulted through the air. The bottle of hair tonic flew out of his hand, describing a high arc, then came back down.
Akaneniichuan Poll Results
The poll asked, "Which character, if cursed by the Akaneniichuan, would put it to the most perverted use?"
The winner by far, with 18 of 45 votes (45%) was one of Ranma's other fiancees, Shampoo, Ukyo or Kodachi. I know, in fact, of a couple of stories where Shampoo did so. In one she had sex with Kuno in front of the entire school in order to brand Akane as a slut, except it backfired when Akane appeared on the scene and everyone found out what was going on. In the other Shampoo had the real Akane shipped off to China, while she remained in Japan with the curse locked and married Ranma (with him thinking she was Akane - Shampoo also had her voice removed so that speaking wouldn't give her away).
In second and third places, with 5 and 4 votes out of 45 respectively (11% and 8%), were Happosai and Tatewaki Kuno. I can easily imagine either of them using it while playing with themselves, and Happosai using it to bathe with Nabiki and Kasumi.
Tied for third with 3 votes out of 45 (6%) were Ryoga, Nabiki, Cologne, a male schoolmate such as Hiroshi, Daisuke or Hikaru, or someone else entirely (without much indication of who the someone else would be). Nabiki would probably use it to make money (dirty pictures, etc.), and I imagine Cologne would use it to have sex with Ranma.
In the last two places were Kasumi with 2 of 45 votes (4%), and Ranma with only 1 vote (2%).
The winner by far, with 18 of 45 votes (45%) was one of Ranma's other fiancees, Shampoo, Ukyo or Kodachi. I know, in fact, of a couple of stories where Shampoo did so. In one she had sex with Kuno in front of the entire school in order to brand Akane as a slut, except it backfired when Akane appeared on the scene and everyone found out what was going on. In the other Shampoo had the real Akane shipped off to China, while she remained in Japan with the curse locked and married Ranma (with him thinking she was Akane - Shampoo also had her voice removed so that speaking wouldn't give her away).
In second and third places, with 5 and 4 votes out of 45 respectively (11% and 8%), were Happosai and Tatewaki Kuno. I can easily imagine either of them using it while playing with themselves, and Happosai using it to bathe with Nabiki and Kasumi.
Tied for third with 3 votes out of 45 (6%) were Ryoga, Nabiki, Cologne, a male schoolmate such as Hiroshi, Daisuke or Hikaru, or someone else entirely (without much indication of who the someone else would be). Nabiki would probably use it to make money (dirty pictures, etc.), and I imagine Cologne would use it to have sex with Ranma.
In the last two places were Kasumi with 2 of 45 votes (4%), and Ranma with only 1 vote (2%).
Saturday, August 6, 2016
Next Scene Involves Akane
I'm well into the next scene, which will be centered around Akane. I'm about one half to two thirds of the way through, based on my intentions. I think it's quite a bit whackier than the others so far, although to make it work I had to invoke cliche anger management issues on Akane's part. Although it's not excessive, and these kinds of stories are usually heavy on cliche anyway.
Thursday, August 4, 2016
Nabiki Reversed, part 3
Read parts 1 and 2 first.
Nabiki licked her lips while looking at the boy standing in the doorway, staring at her with his arms crossed. So far he hadn't said a word, not even to greet her. “So, um, hi Ochida-kun ...” she started.
“Gotta admit,” Noboru Ochida interrupted her, “I wasn't expecting to see you again after our date. You made it pretty clear you didn't owe me anything, afterward.” He could guess why she might be here after the stuff Shoichi and Isamu were saying online, but saw no reason to make it any easier on her.
Nabiki looked embarrassed. “Um, yes. I do need to apologize about that. I was wrong, I admit it. If you let me, I'll make it up to you now.”
Noboru said nothing but took a step backward. Nabiki slipped past and entered the house, then turned to him and said cheerfully, “So which way to your bedroom?”
He led the way around a corner and into the family room. “My parents won't be home from work for a couple of hours yet. This'll do fine.”
Nabiki looked around and suppressed a grimace. She'd much prefer a bed, but needs must. Smiling again, she unzipped her skirt and let it fall. As she continued removing clothing, she grew puzzled that Noboru was simply standing there, watching her.
Nabiki licked her lips while looking at the boy standing in the doorway, staring at her with his arms crossed. So far he hadn't said a word, not even to greet her. “So, um, hi Ochida-kun ...” she started.
“Gotta admit,” Noboru Ochida interrupted her, “I wasn't expecting to see you again after our date. You made it pretty clear you didn't owe me anything, afterward.” He could guess why she might be here after the stuff Shoichi and Isamu were saying online, but saw no reason to make it any easier on her.
Nabiki looked embarrassed. “Um, yes. I do need to apologize about that. I was wrong, I admit it. If you let me, I'll make it up to you now.”
Noboru said nothing but took a step backward. Nabiki slipped past and entered the house, then turned to him and said cheerfully, “So which way to your bedroom?”
He led the way around a corner and into the family room. “My parents won't be home from work for a couple of hours yet. This'll do fine.”
Nabiki looked around and suppressed a grimace. She'd much prefer a bed, but needs must. Smiling again, she unzipped her skirt and let it fall. As she continued removing clothing, she grew puzzled that Noboru was simply standing there, watching her.
Nabiki Reversed, part 2
From part 1:
At that point Nabiki saw the jewel attached to the front of Akane's shirt, which was crumpled up on the floor in front of the door. Habitually inclined to borrow her sister's things, Nabiki picked the shirt up off the floor and detached the jewel. Admiring the pretty ornament for a moment, she attached it to the bottom of the necklace hanging around her neck. The diamonds inlaid in the jade surface made an arc curving downward at the bottom.
It was only her bad luck that this was the reversed position of the Reversal Jewel, causing one's natural inclinations in love and romance to be turned upside down.
Shoichi Nakamura opened his front door, only to find to his surprise that the one who had knocked was Nabiki Tendo. A pretty hot looking Nabiki Tendo, in a short skirt and a blouse open to show some sort of green jewelry on a necklace nestled within her delectable cleavage. A pity she hadn't dressed like this for their date last night. Speaking of which ... why was she back so soon?
“Hello Tendo-san,” he essayed carefully. “What may I do for you?”
Nabiki stepped forward, placing herself firmly inside his personal space. She looked up into his eyes and said, “I wanted to apologize for the way I treated you last night. You bought me flowers and a gift, and paid for my dinner and the tickets to the play, and ... all I gave you in return was to let you kiss me on the cheek. I realized today that wasn't fair at all.” She reached out a finger and ran it down the bare skin of his arm.
Shoichi was temporarily speechless. When he had given her a look of betrayal at the end of their date last night, after spending so much upon her, she had explained the facts of life to him in clear and unmistakable sentences. It was the natural order of things for boys to spend money on her in exchange for being graced with her presence, but her affections were most definitely not for sale. Yet now she seemed to be suggesting ...
He cleared his throat. “Umm, so you're here to ...?” He trailed off, wondering if she would complete the statement.
“To make your dreams come true,” she declared throatily. The palm of her hand on his chest pushed him further inside, and she followed him, closing the door behind herself. “So where's your room, Nakamura-kun?”
At that point Nabiki saw the jewel attached to the front of Akane's shirt, which was crumpled up on the floor in front of the door. Habitually inclined to borrow her sister's things, Nabiki picked the shirt up off the floor and detached the jewel. Admiring the pretty ornament for a moment, she attached it to the bottom of the necklace hanging around her neck. The diamonds inlaid in the jade surface made an arc curving downward at the bottom.
It was only her bad luck that this was the reversed position of the Reversal Jewel, causing one's natural inclinations in love and romance to be turned upside down.
Shoichi Nakamura opened his front door, only to find to his surprise that the one who had knocked was Nabiki Tendo. A pretty hot looking Nabiki Tendo, in a short skirt and a blouse open to show some sort of green jewelry on a necklace nestled within her delectable cleavage. A pity she hadn't dressed like this for their date last night. Speaking of which ... why was she back so soon?
“Hello Tendo-san,” he essayed carefully. “What may I do for you?”
Nabiki stepped forward, placing herself firmly inside his personal space. She looked up into his eyes and said, “I wanted to apologize for the way I treated you last night. You bought me flowers and a gift, and paid for my dinner and the tickets to the play, and ... all I gave you in return was to let you kiss me on the cheek. I realized today that wasn't fair at all.” She reached out a finger and ran it down the bare skin of his arm.
Shoichi was temporarily speechless. When he had given her a look of betrayal at the end of their date last night, after spending so much upon her, she had explained the facts of life to him in clear and unmistakable sentences. It was the natural order of things for boys to spend money on her in exchange for being graced with her presence, but her affections were most definitely not for sale. Yet now she seemed to be suggesting ...
He cleared his throat. “Umm, so you're here to ...?” He trailed off, wondering if she would complete the statement.
“To make your dreams come true,” she declared throatily. The palm of her hand on his chest pushed him further inside, and she followed him, closing the door behind herself. “So where's your room, Nakamura-kun?”
Tuesday, August 2, 2016
Reversal Jewel Scene - draft done
Just finished, finally, the first draft of the reversal jewel scene. Well over 6000, closer to 7000 words. It's very late and I'm calling it quits for tonight (with dawn not so terribly far off). I'll try to work on polishing it up for posting tomorrow, if nothing else comes up.
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