Tuesday, August 1, 2017

Monster of Nerima

Not really up to writing a story. This is more an outline of a story, so it may make for rather dry reading. Nonetheless offered here in case anyone is interested.

Ranma is still looking for a way to cure his curse, of which the surest is to bathe in the waters of the Nanniichuan. However, he cannot afford a trip to China or to have water from the pool shipped to him. He hits upon the idea of having Kuno pay for it, by appealing to him in the form of the pigtailed girl. So in female form Ranma describes to Kuno a spa in western China called Jusenkyo, and how she's particularly interested in water from a spring called the Nanniichuan. And how she'd be ever so grateful, and would prove how grateful she was, if Kuno would get a cask of water from that pool shipped to her (Ranma chooses to avoid all the logistic difficulties and added expense of getting Kuno to take Ranma on a trip there). Kuno magnanimously, and a touch lecherously, agrees to do this to please his pigtailed girl.

So Kuno arranges through a family business to contact Jusenkyo, and someone there sends them an order form, with some fairly steep prices. Kuno goes to the office of the person who made contact, takes the order form, intends to check the box marked 男溺泉 (Nanniichuan) but accidentally marks the box on the line below which is 触手溺泉 (Shokushuniichuan). In due time he is notified that a warehouse has the desired cask of water. Kuno notifies Ranma, who wants to handle the matter in secret so no one else will know about and try to steal the water. Kuno takes female-Ranma to the warehouse after hours, when no one else is present. They easily identify the correct crate, open the top, and see the cask inside (there are no markings on the cask itself). Kuno jumps down into the crate and lifts the cask up to Ranma standing on the edges at a corner of the top of the crate. Between them it slips and drops, breaking open. The waters fill the interior of the crate, knocking Kuno off of his feet, and he is fully immersed in the water.

When Kuno stands up he has clearly changed. The whites of his eyes are now red. More obviously, the back of his shirt has torn open, and approximately 100 tentacles are waving around in the air behind his back. Ranma is obviously startled and drops down outside. He looks carefully at the outside of the crate, finds an invoice, and sees the kanji identifying the waters as from the Spring of Drowned Tentacle Monster (no doubt done before multiple times, but this is my take). He is very annoyed that Kuno got water from the wrong pool, while simultaneously happy that he didn't fall into the water himself.

Meanwhile instincts are flooding into Kuno's mind. He is very aroused, with a strong desire to find a girl or girls to "play" with, as these instincts think of it. His body immediately started emitting pheromones which heighten female arousal, reduce willpower to resist, and makes anyone nearby lethargic. Knowing that there is a girl in the warehouse with him, he leaps out of the crate in one bound and confronts Ranma.

Matters proceed about how one should expect at this point. Tentacles whip out and grab Ranma by the wrists and ankles, hoisting her into the air. Ranma struggles and protests verbally, but finds herself failing to resist as actively as she believes she ought, and her strength seems not fully available. Not to mention the tentacles seem to be quite strong. More embarrassingly, her nipples harden and she feels slippery between her legs. More tentacles reach out, growing thinner near their ends, and unfasten Ranma's shirt, pants and shoes. Then her clothes are pulled off her body, with various tentacles swapping places as necessary when the clothes are pulled over her wrists and ankles.

The tentacles focus first on stimulating Ranma to increase her physical arousal. Sliding along her slit. Massaging and squeezing her breasts. Openings on the end of a couple of tentacles widening, closing over her nipples, and applying suction. After Ranma's pussy is dripping wet, the tentacle between her legs pulls away, thickens at the end, and then slowly pushes its way up into Ranma's vagina. Another tentacle, not quite as thick, would secrete some lubricant and then force its way deep into Ranma's ass. When Ranma's protests become quite loud, a third tentacle would push into her mouth to silence her, also secreting a chemical to suppress her gag reflex as it slides in to fill her mouth all the way back to her throat (and perhaps down her throat, but I'm a realist and would be compelled to write something explaining how Ranma is allowed to breathe).

The fucking would proceed from there, with much pistoning in all three holes. Ranma's arousal would continue to increase, from the stimulation, from the pheromones, and from an aphrodisiac component of the semen ejaculated by the tentacles. Each of the three tentacles would ejaculate multiple times in beyond-human quantities each time. Ranma would also start helplessly having orgasms herself. Ranma would come at least a dozen times, and the tentacles would erupt to fill her holes with five loads each (perhaps fewer in her ass, just for variation).

Although Kuno is still horny, he realizes the pigtailed girl is totally fucked and not really able to continue. He sets her on her feet and withdraws his tentacles. Ranma collapses forward onto hands and knees, coughing out semen to clear her throat and mouth to a degree. Giving up on trying to speak immediately, she instead crawls across the floor into a restroom. Happily there is hot water from the sink and a pail on the floor. She tries to walk, but ends up crawling back out, dragging the pail. She speaks in a halting manner, telling Kuno the truth about Jusenkyo, a truth he has ignored on previous occasions, splashes herself to change back to male, then splashes Kuno to change him back to human.

Then Ranma falls flat on his face, exhausted and unconscious.

A bemused and enlightened Kuno, now a victim of a curse himself, finally understands and believes the truth about Jusenkyo curses. Although his delusions force him to think of Ranma as being as much of a girl as a boy, or even being more girl than boy. In other words, he did not just totally fuck a boy who was temporarily a girl. Rather, he thoroughly screwed a lovely girl who sometimes goes around in the guise of a rather annoying boy.

Kuno cleans everything up, pouring the Jusenkyo water down a drain. Ranma is still unconscious. Shrugging, he lifts Ranma up and throws him over his shoulder, then walks to the Tendo home. The people of Nerima are accustomed to the sight of one martial artist manhandling another who has lost a challenge, and pay scant attention. Deep in thought over what has happened, Kuno does not wish to engage in long explanations at this time. So he simply dumps Ranma inside the gate of the Tendo compound, then returns to his own home to think, and probably perform some experiments.

I have more in mind, but this is the introduction. Let me know if you'd like to read any further thoughts I have on this. However, like I said, don't expect me to write this up as a story anytime soon. That involves a lot more effort, and I'm not really feeling up to it.

6 comments:

  1. By the way, I'm not too sure about the shokushu (触手). One source gave it as the translation of "tentacle monster". Another suggested it only means tentacle(s).

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  2. I like the couple Kuno/Ranma, but "tentacles" are not my favorite genre.
    It's interesting the "probably perform some experiments" part of the ending, I'm a curious!

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  3. I'm just glad you're still brainstorming, since you really are a great author of Ranma smut!

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  4. To Anonymous: someone wanted me to write something bad, so I did. Though in fact I kind of like the way it came out, and could probably turn it into something decent, by my standards of "decent."

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  5. It's good to see you writing again. Keep up the good work.

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  6. I likes this idea. Too bad it's just a draft.

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