Monster of Nerima

Not really up to writing a story. This is more an outline of a story, so it may make for rather dry reading. Nonetheless offered here in case anyone is interested.

Ranma is still looking for a way to cure his curse, of which the surest is to bathe in the waters of the Nanniichuan. However, he cannot afford a trip to China or to have water from the pool shipped to him. He hits upon the idea of having Kuno pay for it, by appealing to him in the form of the pigtailed girl. So in female form Ranma describes to Kuno a spa in western China called Jusenkyo, and how she's particularly interested in water from a spring called the Nanniichuan. And how she'd be ever so grateful, and would prove how grateful she was, if Kuno would get a cask of water from that pool shipped to her (Ranma chooses to avoid all the logistic difficulties and added expense of getting Kuno to take Ranma on a trip there). Kuno magnanimously, and a touch lecherously, agrees to do this to please his pigtailed girl.

So Kuno arranges through a family business to contact Jusenkyo, and someone there sends them an order form, with some fairly steep prices. Kuno goes to the office of the person who made contact, takes the order form, intends to check the box marked 男溺泉 (Nanniichuan) but accidentally marks the box on the line below which is 触手溺泉 (Shokushuniichuan). In due time he is notified that a warehouse has the desired cask of water. Kuno notifies Ranma, who wants to handle the matter in secret so no one else will know about and try to steal the water. Kuno takes female-Ranma to the warehouse after hours, when no one else is present. They easily identify the correct crate, open the top, and see the cask inside (there are no markings on the cask itself). Kuno jumps down into the crate and lifts the cask up to Ranma standing on the edges at a corner of the top of the crate. Between them it slips and drops, breaking open. The waters fill the interior of the crate, knocking Kuno off of his feet, and he is fully immersed in the water.

Alternate Pink (and Link)

So it's been just over a year since I last posted here. Sigh. My health pretty much completely crashed. I'm feeling a little better lately, but don't know yet if I can count that as a trend. I have been getting caught up, slowly, on the toons over at Hentai Foundry. I'm hoping that's a good sign.

What if Pink bred aphrodisiacs instead of poisons? And her twin Link bred antidotes, of course. They still became Shampoo's enemies (perhaps a few years later than canon) when Pink dosed Shampoo who then let Mousse have his wicked way with her. Until Link happened by and gave her the antidote just as the happy couple were having a screaming climax.

Now years later, they're determined to ruin Shampoo's "marriage". They show up in Nerima with plans to dose Shampoo when she's around guys other than Ranma to make her cheat on her "husband". And likewise dose Ranma when he's around girls other than Shampoo. And with plans to administer the antidote to each just as their "spouse" shows up.

Of course they screw it up and dose the wrong people. Including Ranma as a girl. Including themselves. Including Genma and Soun (resulting in a shocked but very satisfied Nodoka). For the big, er, climax, Ranma goes in to rescue Shampoo from Pink and Link after the former has turned the tables on the twins, unbeknownst to him. The result: he ends up doing the nasty with all three. Then Akane goes in after them all, with some artifacts provided by Cologne (who has no intention of getting anywhere close to the scene). She needs to clear Ranma's head of the ahprodisiac's influence, but the only Amazon tool Cologne could provide to do so requires Ranma to fuck until it's burned out of his system, and Akane "sacrifices" herself rather than allow Ranma to screw his brain sane with the other girls. Except of course she starts falling under the influence of the plants herself, and stops resisting the involvement of the other girls.

I wonder if the plants would be, hmm, tentacular?

Minor Poll Blip

If you looked at my blog earlier, for a brief time you might have seen the alleged results of the latest poll. That was my goof. My new polling widget doesn't automatically close the poll at a specified time. For some reason I thought tonight was the night I said I was going to close it, but it's tomorrow. So I closed it and posted the results. After I realized my mistake, I reopened the poll and removed the results.

Oh well.

I won't be posting anything else tonight. My evil wife brought home a recently published book from the library that I was planning to buy after it came out in paperback. And I'm anxious to get back to it.

If I were writing (or reading) a "Groundhog Day" style story without lemon bits, I think it might be interesting to force Nabiki to live through Ranma's and Akane's attempted wedding, over and over and over again. With it dissolving into disaster in as many different ways as possible, even when she herself actively conspires to keep all of the crazies ignorant. And she'd be informed by some kami just before the first repetition - or maybe after a couple of dozen - that she can't break out of the loop until she figures out some way for the wedding to be carried off successfully. I can just picture Nabiki going crazy as she tries to do something good for once in her life, and can't figure out a way to keep other people from screwing it up, again and again and again.

Greenery Day, Day 2

Awareness of a new day slowly filtered in. Ranma Saotome, teenage martial artist, awoke slowly as was his custom. Eyes still closed to fend off the moment of arising as long as possible, he found himself remembering the previous day with considerable annoyance. Damn his pop anyway! Just who did his old man think he was, figuring he had the right to tell him who to marry? And then making him swear on his honor not to run off on his own?

Then there was that tomboy, Akane Tendo, they were trying to tell him to marry. As if! What kind of girl whacks a guy over the head with a table, just for pointing out the obvious fact that his cursed form had a bigger chest? And damn it! She had gotten just as good a look at him as he got at her, when she walked in on him in the bathing room. He hadn't said anything more than the truth!

Ranma paused at that, the mental image recalled when the girl had walked in on him, wearing nothing more than her skin and carrying a small towel. He ran his tongue over suddenly dry lips, aware of morning wood that he couldn't explain away as the usual reason. Well, okay, he'd admit to himself that this Akane was pretty damned cute, not that he would ever admit it to her. But that sure as hell wasn't any reason to make him agree to marry her!

"Come on, boy, wake up! Today's the day when you meet my old friend, Tendo-kun!"

Ranma's eyes snapped open involuntarily at that. What the hell was his pop talking about? He'd met the Tendos yesterday.

His eyes widened. They were surrounded by trees, the same park where they'd slept night before last. He was in his sleeping bag, and his pack was on the ground beside him. What the hell was going on? He'd gone to sleep last night on a futon in the Tendos spare room. How'd he get out here?

Gender-swapped Nerima 2

Continuing on yesterday's theme of three Tendo sons, one of whom is to marry an allegedly female Ranma - which he isn't, but Genma has managed to convince everyone.

I think Kazuma would be a very suave, polished type, one who is accustomed to sweeping any woman off her feet. One with a heart of gold, aside from his tendency to try to sleep with anything in a skirt. Noburo is the sort to tell women lies in order to try to have his way with them. There are probably several high school girls whom he promised to love forever, and then dropped after he got into their pants. Akeno is the one most interested in the martial arts, and hasn't done a lot of dating because he doesn't care for girls who throw themselves at him, and most of the girls at Furinkan have been doing precisely that. However, Ranma's obvious (initial) resistance to the brothers' charms intrigues Akeno.

Hmm, you know, Ranma would have no objection to sparring with Akeno. He's perfectly willing to fight with males.

I think at Genma's suggestion and Kimiko's acquiescence, the brothers (and Genma) would carry holstered water pistols around. Whenever Ranma "accidentally" changes into his supposed cursed form (male), he would be caught in a crossfire of squirts and quickly changed back to female. Genma would also throw out all of Ranma's male clothes and provide only female clothing for his "daughter" to wear. He'd probably do that before they even reach the Tendo's, except for possibly the clothes Ranma is wearing at the time, and he'll get that last set of clothing the first time Ranma takes a bath. Genma will also try to coerce Ranma into wearing a girl's uniform and attending school as a girl, though I'd have to think about how that's to be accomplished, or even whether it would be initially successful.

Rather than being manic about wanting a manly son, Nodoka is neurotically depressed that she never had a daughter. When she finds out what's going on, she wholeheartedly endorses Genma's plan. She "confirms" to the Tendos that Ranma was in fact born a girl, putting to rest some doubts which had started to fester.

I'd have to think about whether to gender swap others like Shampoo, Ukyo and Ryoga, or keep them as they are. Ukyo might be interesting as a crossdressing lesbian, who became that way after the humiliation of Ranma casting aside their engagement. She's as shocked as Ranma to learn that she was mistaken all these years about the other person's gender. The fact that Ranma was supposedly female means that it wasn't "her" fault after all that the engagement didn't work out, and the lesbian sees a pretty hot redhead, and decides to try to steal her former "girlfriend" from those distasteful guys.

Gender-swapped Nerima

The idea came into my head to have Genma and Ranma show up in a Nerima where everyone's genders are the opposite of canon (except for Nodoka). Genma and Ranma are the same - male, with curses to turn into a panda and a girl.

So they show up at the Tendo home where Kimiko Tendo's husband Soun died young, leaving her to raise their three sons: Kazuma, Noburo and Akeno. Kazuma is a second year premed student, and has seduced and is having an ongoing affair with local nurse Toku Ono, who acts extremely shy and nervous around Kazuma. Genma had promised his old friend Soun on his deathbed that one day their families would be united, that he and Nodoka would have a daughter who would marry one of Soun's sons. Except he didn't have any more children, only the son he already had, Ranma. (Kimiko by the way knows about the promise but doesn't know anything about Nodoka or Ranma.). So Genma took him on a long training trip, teaching him to be a great martial artist, but secondarily looking for an answer to his oath. He found it when he heard about the cursed springs of Jusenkyo, and purposely got his son cursed to turn into a girl. Of course, he hadn't expected to be cursed himself.

On the way to the Tendo house, Genma deliberately gets them caught in the rain so that Ranma arrives in girl form. The eyes of all three sons light up at the sight of the pretty redhead. When the curse is revealed, Genma explains that Ranma has a reversed curse, she is a girl cursed to turn into a boy at the touch of hot water. However, it should be quite easy to keep cold water handy to turn her back into a girl whenever she accidentally turns into a boy.

Naturally, Ranma protests. Genma explains that she's just nervous about the whole engagement thing, trying to get out of it because the idea scares her. And these claims about being a boy are just nonsense that she's making up as part of that. All that should be necessary is for one of the boys to convince Ranma of how great it is to be a girl, and particularly to be that boy's fiancee ...

Happosai's plan

Picture of bound Ranma and Akane having sex

I think the background for this scene goes something like this.

Soun leaned back on the engawa, taking a long draw on the cigarette in one hand, then sipping from the bowl of sake in the other. "I swear, Saotome-kun, we're never going to get that boy of yours married to my daughter!"

Tendo incest

Picture of Akane having sex with her father

There don't seem to be very many good stories involving incest in the Ranma 1/2 universe, with perhaps the exception of Genma and Ranma. Unfortunately, a Genma/Ranma pairing doesn't do much for me — probably because a pairing of Genma with anyone doesn't do much for me, unless I'm in a certain mood.

Mind you, there are such stories out there. But it seems that they usually don't manage to bring me into the story, even to the mild degree needed for porn. Somehow they don't manage to sell me on their set up.

What I'd really like to see is a story in which Soun has incestuous desires concerning his daughters, but in a subtle rather than an overt fashion. I.e., he doesn't have out-and-out sex with them, or engage in obvious peeping. But he has insisted that daughters require discipline so long as they live under their father's roof (and maybe beyond), and that proper discipline is administered upon bare bottoms (or perhaps even other bare areas). He insists that proper Japanese families bathe together. He monitors their hygiene by watching carefully while they bathe, and bathing anything himself where he feels they are too lax. He monitors their health by such practices as regular measurements, at least of breast size, and possibly also other aspects such as areola diameter and pubic hair extent. He insists that pubic hair be trimmed, or even entirely shaved, and the girls never do so sufficiently well themselves, so he must always touch it up. There is a spectrum of possibilities on which he can fall here, from only slightly abnormal behavior to utterly psychotic.

Then Genma and Ranma show up. Genma is merely confused by his old friend's behavior, doesn't know what to make of it, but advises his son that it is a father's right to raise his children as he sees fit. On the other hand, since Ranma must marry one of the girls, Soun starts to draw Ranma into his eccentricities. Ranma slowly metamorphoses from being weirded out to becoming addicted to these games.

I don't really see Soun playing his games with female-Ranma. Ranma won't have had the years of training to submit to such behavior that the Tendo girls had. Soun might try a little bit, like measuring Ranma's breasts, but I think Ranma would put a stop to it. And in any case, Soun is concentrating on Ranma being his male heir. On the other hand, I think he would take advantage of Ranma's female form where his daughters are concerned. For instance, Soun could insist that Ranma accompany his daughters (in female form) in public bathhouses and the like, to enforce his standards in locations where he himself cannot.

Ryoga spanking Ranma

Picture of Ryoga spanking Yoiko-Ranma

Remember the arc where Akane visited Ryoga's house, and Ranma pretended to be Ryoga's non-existent little sister Yoiko? I can easily imagine that Ryoga realized it was Ranma, and used it as an excuse to give her a very, very thorough paddling. Right in front of Akane. A much more intense punishment than in canon, one which would leave Ranma bawling, begging for mercy, and promising to be a good little girl from now on.

And Ranma would have to live with the embarrassment of knowing that Akane and Ryoga both remember this spanking. And that they both know - although perhaps Akane was only certain afterward - that it was Ranma whom Ryoga was spanking.

Akane earning money

Picture of Akane riding Kuno while apologizing to Ranma.

In the above cartoon, a naked Akane is sitting astride Tatewaki Kuno's cock while apologizing to Ranma. It seems her father has been lending too much money to others, and it's now necessary to raise some money somehow. And Kuno has become a regular customer.

I sometimes think about scenarios similar to this, usually before Ranma arrives in Nerima, and usually without Kuno making an appearance either. The idea is that the girls' father Soun has somehow wasted or lost a lot of money, leaving the family in dire straits. Nabiki makes arrangements to recover the money they need by having boys at school pay to get hugs and/or kisses from Akane. Akane protests, asking why she's the one who has to do this. Nabiki explains that none of the boys would pay for such things from herself or the "older woman" Kasumi so long as the possible temptation of Akane is in front of them. For some reason Akane believes this, stressing that hugs and kisses are all that she'll allow, and any perverted boy who tries anything more will get his arms broken. Nabiki agrees, and the plan goes off without a hitch, barring a few broken arms.

Nabiki finds that she really, really enjoyed manipulating Akane into this. Kasumi, much to her own shock, discovers she is intensely aroused by her little sister having to degrade herself in such a fashion in order to earn the money the family needed, a fact that she tries to keep secret. Except Nabiki learns of it. Their father remains oblivious to the whole thing.

So Nabiki and Kasumi arrange a counterfeit situation in which it appears that the family is in financial difficulty again. A grumpy Akane agrees to help out once more. But Nabiki explains that the horny teenage boys aren't willing to pay anywhere near as much for the same old thing. In order to raise sufficient money, Akane is going to have to let them grope her through her clothing. After much complaint, and a whispered, "Please, Akane, for the family's sake," from Kasumi, the young teenager reluctantly agrees.

From there it progresses in small increments, to greater and greater perversions, until Akane is allowing boys to ejactulate everywhere on her bound and nude body, and even use their fingers to push some of the semen inside her mouth and cunt afterward. Then one day, as a well hung boy is standing between the legs of a bound Akane, jacking off, Nabiki announces that their father dropped a bundle at pachinko last night and the mortgage is due. She apologizes and says that they have no choice but to cut out the middleman. The boy promptly spears Akane's cunt with his cock, and dumps a load inside her a couple of minutes later. Followed in turn by the other boys in that morning's group.

Shampoo gives Akane a choice

One of my favorite bondage pictures of Akane:

Akane captured by Shampoo, photographed by Gosunkugi.

Curiously, I don't imagine Shampoo is expecting to do anything particularly nasty to Akane in this scene. She is fondling Akane, and she's allowing Gosunkugi to take pictures of her in a state of bondage (but fully clothed). No doubt Gosunkugi is going to sell copies of those photographs to the boys at school, which is certainly sufficient to be terribly mortifying for Akane. Shampoo has already informed her captive that this is a punishment for getting between Shampoo and her airen.

But what Shampoo is currently explaining to Akane is her present choice. Either Akane can give up on Ranma permanently, and swear on her honor she will do so. Or, Shampoo will invite the hentai horde over while Akane is still bound there, and leave her to their mercy (of which they cannot be expected to have any). Shampoo is confident that the trembling girl who can barely contemplate hugging her fiance will choose the former, removing a troublesome rival. But in reality Akane is seriously considering the second choice, hoping against hope that the boys won't do anything too perverted, or that Ranma will show up in time and rescue her, or that Shampoo will have a last minute change of heart and not go through with it. Or something.

If I were writing it, I think I'd have Shampoo shocked at Akane's decision, and then angry. She would talk herself into going through with it. But I'd go for a less brutal touch than MV. The boys would molest Akane pretty seriously, fondling her, peeking at the goodies, maybe a little bukkake. But Ranma would in fact arrive before they could decide whether they're willing to do anything more severe than that.

Hmm, and maybe after chasing the boys off (with significant injuries), the sight of Akane hanging there, clothing disarranged, covered in semen, would awaken something in Ranma. I'm sure he would need to comfort her afterward. And with one thing leading to another, he would comfort her very thoroughly the whole night long.

And maybe later Akane and Ukyo would team up to stake Shampoo out for a taste of her own medicine.

Pink, Link and the Garden of Love

An interesting variation on the Pink and Link arc might be if Pink and Link were bisexual, and decided to get revenge on Shampoo by having sex with both her and her "husband" Ranma. They reason that most married couples wouldn't be able to handle the memory of watching their spouse willingly having sex with someone else right in front of them.

So instead of growing a poisonous forest at Furinkan, they grow a forest of aphrodisiacal plants. Ranma and Shampoo start to succumb, and each go down on one of the girls. Akane, believing the plants to be poisonous, comes in to the rescue as in canon. She finds Ranma with his mouth buried between Link's legs, bashes him in fury, and drags him away. Meanwhile the effect of the plants is fighting its way past her natural defenses. Ranma wakes up just as she's reaching the point of giving in to resistance (or maybe he even wakes up a little after Akane gives in). The pair of them start going at it with all the (loud) forcefulness of martial artists.

Back at the center of the forest, Pink and Link shrug their shoulders, figure they shouldn't let what they have go to waste, and have a very long and thorough session with Shampoo. Who ends up deciding that she likes girls better than boys, and that her two former rivals make better lovers than enemies.

When Akane and Ranma finally finish, they pick themselves up weakly and prepare to stumble their way out of the forest. Whereupon they discover that their lust-filled minds had failed to notice that they were almost at the edge. And just beyond the edge is a crowd containing everyone they know, who have been watching - and listening - to the entire show they just put on. Everyone gives them a huge round of applause (with the exception of a resigned Cologne) and the fathers put on (happily) stern faces and insist that now the two of them must get married immediately, to which an equally stern (and madly blushing) Kasumi adds her vote.

Mousse enjoying Shampoo

Follow this link to an image of Mousse having some fun with Shampoo's body.

I particularly like the expression on Shampoo's face. It looks like a cross between "How dare you!" and "Holy shit! I never realized it would feel this good!"

I think the story behind the picture is something like the following.

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Shampoo skipped down the stairs bubbling with excitement. Now I only need to feed that special ramen I prepared to my airen, she thought happily. He won't be able to resist me. We'll consummate our marriage - actually, we'll fuck like bunnies. She giggled at the thought. And after that he'll follow me anywhere. We can finally leave this place and go home.

Practically dancing into the kitchen, she stopped in confusion. Where was the bowl she had left on the counter? She hadn't been gone more than two minutes! "Where is ramen Shampoo leave here?" she demanded unhappily in broken Japanese.

Mousse looked up from his dinner, his gaze locking on the girl he loved. The thick lenses of his glasses magnified those eyes, their smoky intensity drawing Shampoo's attention hypnotically to the flames glowing in their pupils. She felt herself shiver involuntarily, and backed up a step when Mousse pushed himself to his feet.

"If you refer to the bowl which I found on the counter there when I finished cleaning up, I assumed it was for me," the young Chinese man replied in a low, resonant voice. "It was very tasty. But not half so tasty as you look."

Shampoo pressed her back against the wall, and swallowed hard. "What silly Mousse do?" she asked in a hoarse whisper.

Mousse glided toward her, his silk robes whispering as movement by the arms hidden within the long sleeves caused them to brush up against the body. Still speaking with that deep intensity he told the girl, "I have just realized how foolish I have been all this time to wait for you to acknowledge my love. It is time to make you realize you were meant to be mine!"

Shampoo yanked out her massive chui and swung it back, preparing to crush the monster she had created. However, an axe suddenly appeared in front of the boy, flying through the air, and chopped the weapon short. Dropping the shortened handle, the girl spun, preparing to flee through the door. But at that moment lengths of chain shot out of the raised sleeves of Mousse's robes, wrapping tightly around her wrists and pinning them together. The chain went taut and pulled. Feet scrabbling uselessly against the floor, Shampoo was pulled inexorably toward her would-be suitor, until his arms closed upon her.

"And now," Mousse said slowly, "the long wait is over, for both of his." His lips fell upon hers in a burning demand, and Shampoo felt her short dress torn from her body. ...

MV 25 Plotted

I finally plotted out chapter 25 of Moxibustion Violation tonight. It looks like it might not be quite as much of a filler chapter as I was thinking, i.e., if I get everything I plan into it there will be definite plot advancement. On the other hand, there may not be a lot of sex. Don't get scared, though - there will definitely be sex.

I had an idea for a one-shot that I might see about writing someday soon, involving the Tendo and Saotome parents. Actually, I've had several ideas for other stories I hope to write someday. The difference in this case it that I might write the story before finishing MV. We'll see.