In this cartoon idea, Ranma is standing in the door of Akane's bedroom with his jaw hanging. He is holding, currently disregarded, a bouquet of flowers in one hand, and an open box showing an engagement ring in the other hand. Akane is on her bed, naked, straddling and fucking Ryu Kumon (the guy who once pretended to be Ranma to Ranma's mother Nodoka). Akane says over her shoulder to Ranma, "It's not my fault you waited so long to make up your mind. All of us got tired of waiting and made our own choices."
In small images around the edges of the cartoon frame, we see the following:
Shampoo fucking Mousse.
Ukyo fucking Ryoga.
Kodachi fucking her brother Tatewaki.
Kasumi fucking Doctor Tofu.
Nabiki having lesbian sex with the adult Hinako Ninomiya, a bowl containing fighting fish beside them to keep her adult.
This cartoon could obviously be varied by swapping the couples around to fit an individual's personal tastes.
That's the last of the cartoon ideas I had ready to post. Actually, the last few were ones I came up with after I originally started posting this series. So it's quite possible that I'll add still more later on.
Showing posts with label Ukyo Kuonji. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ukyo Kuonji. Show all posts
Saturday, April 4, 2020
Sunday, March 29, 2020
Ucchan's Back Room
The setting for this cartoon idea is Ukyo's okonomiyaki restaurant, Ucchan's. The point of view is from a room in the back, looking through a doorway to the front of the restaurant. The door is set just to one side of the counter/grill behind which Ukyo cooks, and in front of which the customers sit and eat. In this front room we can see Ukyo standing behind the grill, a boy of high school age walking past the grill toward the back room and handing Ukyo some cash as he walks past her, and Ranma sitting in front of the grill and eating okonomiyaki while talking to Ukyo.
Meanwhile, in the back room where our point of view is situated, and just out of sight from the doorway, Akane Tendo is securely tied up in a standing position, gagged, and completely nude. Another boy is standing in front of the teen girl, pants around his ankles, and fucking Akane.
Out in front, Ukyo is saying to Ranma, "Sorry, Ran-chan. But until you come up with the ten thousand yen payment, you don't get to visit the back room to learn what's there." Note that 10,000 yen is on the order of $100 in U.S. dollars.
One possible variation would be for Akane to be a willing participant. Still nude, but not tied up or gagged, and a look of pleasure on her face from the fucking. Another variation would be to replace Akane with another girl, such as Shampoo, Kodachi, Kasumi, or Nabiki. Or maybe to have two or more of these girls turning tricks in the back room. Yet another alternative is to set the scene in the Nekohanten instead of Ucchan's, with either Shampoo or Cologne replacing Ukyo as the one being paid to let customers into the back room, and telling Ranma that he cannot afford the price.
Meanwhile, in the back room where our point of view is situated, and just out of sight from the doorway, Akane Tendo is securely tied up in a standing position, gagged, and completely nude. Another boy is standing in front of the teen girl, pants around his ankles, and fucking Akane.
Out in front, Ukyo is saying to Ranma, "Sorry, Ran-chan. But until you come up with the ten thousand yen payment, you don't get to visit the back room to learn what's there." Note that 10,000 yen is on the order of $100 in U.S. dollars.
One possible variation would be for Akane to be a willing participant. Still nude, but not tied up or gagged, and a look of pleasure on her face from the fucking. Another variation would be to replace Akane with another girl, such as Shampoo, Kodachi, Kasumi, or Nabiki. Or maybe to have two or more of these girls turning tricks in the back room. Yet another alternative is to set the scene in the Nekohanten instead of Ucchan's, with either Shampoo or Cologne replacing Ukyo as the one being paid to let customers into the back room, and telling Ranma that he cannot afford the price.
Saturday, March 28, 2020
Four Akanes
The setting for this cartoon idea is the Tendo family room, sometime late at night. Male Ranma is backed up against a wall, wearing only boxers, looking both frightened and desperate. He is surrounded by four copies of Akane Tendo, one of whom is wearing a filmy nightie, and the other three of whom are entirely nude. In the background of the room is an emptied barrel labeled either "Akaneniichuan" or "Spring of Drowned Akane". The latter would probably be easier to understand for most casual viewers, although the meaning is essentially the same.
One nude Akane says to Ranma, "Airen choose me, not other pervert girls!"
A second nude Akane says, "Ho ho ho! Choose me, Ranma-sama!"
A third nude Akane says, "Come on and pick me, Ran-chan!"
The Akane wearing the filmy nightie says with exasperation, "I knew there was going to be trouble when your mother announced you would marry the girl who took your virginity."
One nude Akane says to Ranma, "Airen choose me, not other pervert girls!"
A second nude Akane says, "Ho ho ho! Choose me, Ranma-sama!"
A third nude Akane says, "Come on and pick me, Ran-chan!"
The Akane wearing the filmy nightie says with exasperation, "I knew there was going to be trouble when your mother announced you would marry the girl who took your virginity."
Tuesday, March 24, 2020
Cursed Cave Exit
The setting for this cartoon idea is on the outside of the exit to the Cursed Cave of Broken Loves. Akane and Ranma are no longer anywhere in sight. Ukyo is being held down, stripped, and raped by a crowd of male ghosts. She currently has ghost cocks in her cunt, her mouth, and a least one hand. Possibly also a ghost cock in her ass, but I don't want to block too much of the view of her body, so if so, then any ghost in front should be mostly transparent. In the meanwhile, Ryoga is being restrained by the female ghosts, so that he cannot come to Ukyo's aid. One female ghost has a hand down Ryoga's pants, and there is an obvious bulge in his pants. One of the ghosts is saying, "This is the real way that we break up couples!"
Saturday, March 14, 2020
Ranma Gets Fed Up
This cartoon idea is set in some generic room with a tatami mat floor, and a long bench in the room. Four nude girls are bent over the bench, tied in place. From left to right (the girls' points of view) they are: Ukyo Kuonji, Akane Tendo, Shampoo, and Kodachi Kuno. We are looking at the scene from the side of the bench the girls' heads are on, so the order of the girls just given is from right to left from the viewer's point of view.
All four girls have their forearms tied together behind their backs, with each hand against the opposing arm's elbow. The girls' heads are looking forward (not down), so we can see their faces, and we can also fully see their tits hanging down in front of the bench. The asses of all four girls are red from being spanked. Male Ranma is kneeling behind Akane, fucking her, while he is also spanking both Ukyo and Shampoo with either hand. Shampoo and Kodachi (to Akane's right) have some semen on their asses and backs, showing that they have already been fucked. Kodachi, Shampoo, and Ukyo have tears running from their eyes due to current or recent spanking, with expressions to match the pain from those spankings. Akane has tear tracks on her face to match the spanking she recently received while Shampoo was being fucked, though her current expression indicates that she is losing the battle to ignore the pleasure of being fucked.
Ranma is saying to the four girls, "And we'll be doing this again! As often as I think necessary!"
One possible addition would be to add small puddles of semen on the floor beneath Kodachi's and Shampoo's pussies, as a further accompaniment to their recently completed fucks. A variation on this would be to indicate they were deflowered, with some blood tinting these puddles of semen, together with some blood drops (but no semen yet) beneath Akane's pussy. Another obvious variation would be to rearrange the four girls, with the girl of one's choice being currently fucked by Ranma. Possibly also to add Kasumi and Nabiki to the girls tied over the bench, or maybe just Nabiki with Kasumi standing nearby saying, "Oh my!" (since Kasumi hasn't done anything to annoy Ranma sufficiently).
All four girls have their forearms tied together behind their backs, with each hand against the opposing arm's elbow. The girls' heads are looking forward (not down), so we can see their faces, and we can also fully see their tits hanging down in front of the bench. The asses of all four girls are red from being spanked. Male Ranma is kneeling behind Akane, fucking her, while he is also spanking both Ukyo and Shampoo with either hand. Shampoo and Kodachi (to Akane's right) have some semen on their asses and backs, showing that they have already been fucked. Kodachi, Shampoo, and Ukyo have tears running from their eyes due to current or recent spanking, with expressions to match the pain from those spankings. Akane has tear tracks on her face to match the spanking she recently received while Shampoo was being fucked, though her current expression indicates that she is losing the battle to ignore the pleasure of being fucked.
Ranma is saying to the four girls, "And we'll be doing this again! As often as I think necessary!"
One possible addition would be to add small puddles of semen on the floor beneath Kodachi's and Shampoo's pussies, as a further accompaniment to their recently completed fucks. A variation on this would be to indicate they were deflowered, with some blood tinting these puddles of semen, together with some blood drops (but no semen yet) beneath Akane's pussy. Another obvious variation would be to rearrange the four girls, with the girl of one's choice being currently fucked by Ranma. Possibly also to add Kasumi and Nabiki to the girls tied over the bench, or maybe just Nabiki with Kasumi standing nearby saying, "Oh my!" (since Kasumi hasn't done anything to annoy Ranma sufficiently).
Thursday, March 12, 2020
Principal Kuno's Haircuts
The setting for this cartoon idea is a sports field at Furinkan High School. There is a long line, stretching off into the distance, of nude female students bound to X-shaped crosses. The first three students, in order, are female Ranma, Akane, and Ukyo. Ranma is hanging limply in despair, her pubic mound completely bald. A crazed, laughing, dancing Principal Kuno is in the process of using hair clippers to remove the pubic hair of a yelling Akane. Ukyo, pubic hair still present, is struggling hard but in vain against her bonds. Other girls down the line are waiting in trepidation.
An additional possibility is that, while using one hand to remove Akane's pubic hair with the clippers, the principal's other hand is in the process of squeezing a tit or fingering her pussy. I would be concerned, however, that such a depiction might restrict the ability to illustrate the principal's crazed nature.
An additional possibility is that, while using one hand to remove Akane's pubic hair with the clippers, the principal's other hand is in the process of squeezing a tit or fingering her pussy. I would be concerned, however, that such a depiction might restrict the ability to illustrate the principal's crazed nature.
Sunday, March 8, 2020
Ucchan is a Girl
The setting for this cartoon idea is a fighting ring set up on the grounds of Furinkan High School, just like the one in which Ranma and Ukyo fought on the first day they met at Furinkan. The ring is completely surrounded by students. A fuming Akane Tendo, in school uniform, is just outside the ring at the front of the crowd. Inside the ring, a male Ranma is screwing a naked Ukyo. Ranma's head is turned to the side, looking directly at Akane, as he explains to her, "I always thought my old pal Ucchan was another boy! I told her I didn't believe her, so she's proving she really is a girl!"
Thursday, August 11, 2016
The Ultimate Teacher, part 2
You should read part 1 first. Warning: There is extreme S&M and nonconsensual sex in this one, with the former in part 1 and the latter in part 2.
After a hurried discussion in the locker room, and a quick check that all of the girls — and more importantly, the crazy teacher — had indeed gone outside, the boys of class 1-F crept back upstairs. Opening the door quietly, a couple of them peeked inside to check that the room was exactly as it had been left. The room was a little dim, what with the lights off and an overcast day, but there was still plenty of light with which to see. Nothing was out of place, and the room was quiet, the five girls at the front apparently having stopped crying and choosing to remain silent.
After a hurried discussion, a protesting Hikaru Gosunkugi was pushed into the classroom. Even with a promised reward, the terror of being recognized by any of these girls before he could complete his task nearly made him wet his pants. Making sure to keep his face averted from the five, he slipped quietly up near the front of the room, and looked into the last box their new teacher had opened.
Finding what he sought, Hikaru lifted out five pieces of leather. Moving up behind Shampoo, he quickly placed the blindfold over her eyes, and continued to keep his face averted while buckling it in place behind her head. As expected, Shampoo cried out at this fresh indignity, and Hikaru prayed that the others would not recognize him when they looked over to discover the cause of this sound.
Moving as rapidly as possible, Hikaru had soon blindfolded all five of the girls. He then motioned to the boys at the door. All of the other boys from the class entered the room, the last one in closing the door again behind himself. None of them spoke, hoping that in the absence of voice recognition the girls would lack absolute certainty regarding their identities.
After a hurried discussion in the locker room, and a quick check that all of the girls — and more importantly, the crazy teacher — had indeed gone outside, the boys of class 1-F crept back upstairs. Opening the door quietly, a couple of them peeked inside to check that the room was exactly as it had been left. The room was a little dim, what with the lights off and an overcast day, but there was still plenty of light with which to see. Nothing was out of place, and the room was quiet, the five girls at the front apparently having stopped crying and choosing to remain silent.
After a hurried discussion, a protesting Hikaru Gosunkugi was pushed into the classroom. Even with a promised reward, the terror of being recognized by any of these girls before he could complete his task nearly made him wet his pants. Making sure to keep his face averted from the five, he slipped quietly up near the front of the room, and looked into the last box their new teacher had opened.
Finding what he sought, Hikaru lifted out five pieces of leather. Moving up behind Shampoo, he quickly placed the blindfold over her eyes, and continued to keep his face averted while buckling it in place behind her head. As expected, Shampoo cried out at this fresh indignity, and Hikaru prayed that the others would not recognize him when they looked over to discover the cause of this sound.
Moving as rapidly as possible, Hikaru had soon blindfolded all five of the girls. He then motioned to the boys at the door. All of the other boys from the class entered the room, the last one in closing the door again behind himself. None of them spoke, hoping that in the absence of voice recognition the girls would lack absolute certainty regarding their identities.
The Ultimate Teacher, part 1
Warning: There is extreme S&M and nonconsensual sex in this one, with the former in part 1 and the latter in part 2.
Principal Kuno of Furinkan High School sat facing the chair on the other side of the desk in his office. A vicious smile curved his mouth and there was a gleam in his eye. In the chair sat a little brown teddy bear.
“When I hear you conquer three school full o' delinquents an' da kine,” the principal said to the bear, “I'm pullin' every string to bring you here! So you got just one mission here ... to crush Ranma Saotome!” The man burst out into maniacal laughter.
Then he leaned back and wiped his forehead. “Okay. Dat's forty-five rehearsals. I wish dat Ninomiya would show up.”
Outside in the schoolyard a young girl no one had seen before was walking toward the school. In appearance, she belonged in elementary school, or perhaps very early middle school. There was a great deal of chatter among the students in the yard wondering what she was doing here at the high school. Most of the talk broke up when she approached Ranma's friends Hiroshi and Daisuke.
“Um ... 'scuse me?” she said to the pair.
Hiroshi smiled at the tyke and asked, “What can we do for ya?”
Her own face lit up and she cheerfully requested, “Can you take me to the principal's office?”
Principal Kuno of Furinkan High School sat facing the chair on the other side of the desk in his office. A vicious smile curved his mouth and there was a gleam in his eye. In the chair sat a little brown teddy bear.
“When I hear you conquer three school full o' delinquents an' da kine,” the principal said to the bear, “I'm pullin' every string to bring you here! So you got just one mission here ... to crush Ranma Saotome!” The man burst out into maniacal laughter.
Then he leaned back and wiped his forehead. “Okay. Dat's forty-five rehearsals. I wish dat Ninomiya would show up.”
Outside in the schoolyard a young girl no one had seen before was walking toward the school. In appearance, she belonged in elementary school, or perhaps very early middle school. There was a great deal of chatter among the students in the yard wondering what she was doing here at the high school. Most of the talk broke up when she approached Ranma's friends Hiroshi and Daisuke.
“Um ... 'scuse me?” she said to the pair.
Hiroshi smiled at the tyke and asked, “What can we do for ya?”
Her own face lit up and she cheerfully requested, “Can you take me to the principal's office?”
Wednesday, June 22, 2016
Lunchtime Lunacy
Ukyo was fed up with being pursued by the admittedly cute girl, even here at school. "Don't you get it, Tsubasa? I'm already engaged to Ran-chan!"
"That ... ugly girl!" Tsubasa was incensed. "You can't be engaged to her!"
Ukyo couldn't believe they were still arguing that point. "I've been trying to tell you, Ranma is a b..."
She was interrupted by Ranma's arrival, dripping wet from a recent change into a girl. She was obviously still upset regarding Tsubasa's insults about her appearance. "Good morning."
Tsubasa spun around, glaring at the redhead. "So ... you come again ... Ugly. Well, we'll just see who is more worthy of Ukyo. We'll have a contest."
Ranma smirked. She knew how hot her female body was. "What sort of contest did you have in mind?" she inquired with a poorly concealed competitive glint in her eye.
Tsubasa leaned forward. "We will both sell okonomiyaki for Ukyo-sama. Whoever sells the most wins, agreed?"
Ranma sneered. "That's stupid. How does that prove who has the hotter body? It needs to be something that proves how badly the boys want you."
Tsubasa reeled backward. "Wh-What are you suggesting? A kissing contest?" She trembled, then stood up straight, and crossed her arms firmly. "Kissing the boys won't prove anything."
"That ... ugly girl!" Tsubasa was incensed. "You can't be engaged to her!"
Ukyo couldn't believe they were still arguing that point. "I've been trying to tell you, Ranma is a b..."
She was interrupted by Ranma's arrival, dripping wet from a recent change into a girl. She was obviously still upset regarding Tsubasa's insults about her appearance. "Good morning."
Tsubasa spun around, glaring at the redhead. "So ... you come again ... Ugly. Well, we'll just see who is more worthy of Ukyo. We'll have a contest."
Ranma smirked. She knew how hot her female body was. "What sort of contest did you have in mind?" she inquired with a poorly concealed competitive glint in her eye.
Tsubasa leaned forward. "We will both sell okonomiyaki for Ukyo-sama. Whoever sells the most wins, agreed?"
Ranma sneered. "That's stupid. How does that prove who has the hotter body? It needs to be something that proves how badly the boys want you."
Tsubasa reeled backward. "Wh-What are you suggesting? A kissing contest?" She trembled, then stood up straight, and crossed her arms firmly. "Kissing the boys won't prove anything."
Friday, October 19, 2012
Gender-swapped Nerima 2
Continuing on yesterday's theme of three Tendo sons, one of whom is to marry an allegedly female Ranma - which he isn't, but Genma has managed to convince everyone.
I think Kazuma would be a very suave, polished type, one who is accustomed to sweeping any woman off her feet. One with a heart of gold, aside from his tendency to try to sleep with anything in a skirt. Noburo is the sort to tell women lies in order to try to have his way with them. There are probably several high school girls whom he promised to love forever, and then dropped after he got into their pants. Akeno is the one most interested in the martial arts, and hasn't done a lot of dating because he doesn't care for girls who throw themselves at him, and most of the girls at Furinkan have been doing precisely that. However, Ranma's obvious (initial) resistance to the brothers' charms intrigues Akeno.
Hmm, you know, Ranma would have no objection to sparring with Akeno. He's perfectly willing to fight with males.
I think at Genma's suggestion and Kimiko's acquiescence, the brothers (and Genma) would carry holstered water pistols around. Whenever Ranma "accidentally" changes into his supposed cursed form (male), he would be caught in a crossfire of squirts and quickly changed back to female. Genma would also throw out all of Ranma's male clothes and provide only female clothing for his "daughter" to wear. He'd probably do that before they even reach the Tendo's, except for possibly the clothes Ranma is wearing at the time, and he'll get that last set of clothing the first time Ranma takes a bath. Genma will also try to coerce Ranma into wearing a girl's uniform and attending school as a girl, though I'd have to think about how that's to be accomplished, or even whether it would be initially successful.
Rather than being manic about wanting a manly son, Nodoka is neurotically depressed that she never had a daughter. When she finds out what's going on, she wholeheartedly endorses Genma's plan. She "confirms" to the Tendos that Ranma was in fact born a girl, putting to rest some doubts which had started to fester.
I'd have to think about whether to gender swap others like Shampoo, Ukyo and Ryoga, or keep them as they are. Ukyo might be interesting as a crossdressing lesbian, who became that way after the humiliation of Ranma casting aside their engagement. She's as shocked as Ranma to learn that she was mistaken all these years about the other person's gender. The fact that Ranma was supposedly female means that it wasn't "her" fault after all that the engagement didn't work out, and the lesbian sees a pretty hot redhead, and decides to try to steal her former "girlfriend" from those distasteful guys.
I think Kazuma would be a very suave, polished type, one who is accustomed to sweeping any woman off her feet. One with a heart of gold, aside from his tendency to try to sleep with anything in a skirt. Noburo is the sort to tell women lies in order to try to have his way with them. There are probably several high school girls whom he promised to love forever, and then dropped after he got into their pants. Akeno is the one most interested in the martial arts, and hasn't done a lot of dating because he doesn't care for girls who throw themselves at him, and most of the girls at Furinkan have been doing precisely that. However, Ranma's obvious (initial) resistance to the brothers' charms intrigues Akeno.
Hmm, you know, Ranma would have no objection to sparring with Akeno. He's perfectly willing to fight with males.
I think at Genma's suggestion and Kimiko's acquiescence, the brothers (and Genma) would carry holstered water pistols around. Whenever Ranma "accidentally" changes into his supposed cursed form (male), he would be caught in a crossfire of squirts and quickly changed back to female. Genma would also throw out all of Ranma's male clothes and provide only female clothing for his "daughter" to wear. He'd probably do that before they even reach the Tendo's, except for possibly the clothes Ranma is wearing at the time, and he'll get that last set of clothing the first time Ranma takes a bath. Genma will also try to coerce Ranma into wearing a girl's uniform and attending school as a girl, though I'd have to think about how that's to be accomplished, or even whether it would be initially successful.
Rather than being manic about wanting a manly son, Nodoka is neurotically depressed that she never had a daughter. When she finds out what's going on, she wholeheartedly endorses Genma's plan. She "confirms" to the Tendos that Ranma was in fact born a girl, putting to rest some doubts which had started to fester.
I'd have to think about whether to gender swap others like Shampoo, Ukyo and Ryoga, or keep them as they are. Ukyo might be interesting as a crossdressing lesbian, who became that way after the humiliation of Ranma casting aside their engagement. She's as shocked as Ranma to learn that she was mistaken all these years about the other person's gender. The fact that Ranma was supposedly female means that it wasn't "her" fault after all that the engagement didn't work out, and the lesbian sees a pretty hot redhead, and decides to try to steal her former "girlfriend" from those distasteful guys.
Saturday, June 25, 2011
Kagome Pairings
I've written some of chapter 30. Ukyo's first time playing with Ranma and Akane under Ryoga's rules. She isn't thrilled to find that Ranma is stuck as a girl and thus can't service her as a boy, but agrees that it's not a bad idea that her former fiancé won't be able to screw Akane anytime soon.
I was reading an Inuyasha lemon yesterday, pairing Inuyasha and Kagome. It got me thinking about something. I enjoy Inuyasha/Kagome lemons. I can also enjoy lemons, dark or otherwise, in which Kagome has sex with Koga, Miroku, Naraku, Shippo, bandits, Hojo, male schoolmates, or other strangers in the past or present (though I'm not partial to these as ordinary pairings). What I am totally unable to read, as ordinary pairing or lemon, dark, light or in-between, is any suggestion of a relationship and/or sex between Kagome and Sesshomaru. It's not that I can't stand reading Sesshomaru pairings - I have no problem if he's paired with Rin, Kagura, or someone else. It's particularly strange when you consider the large number of Kagome/Sesshomaru shippers out there in the fan-fiction universe.
I was reading an Inuyasha lemon yesterday, pairing Inuyasha and Kagome. It got me thinking about something. I enjoy Inuyasha/Kagome lemons. I can also enjoy lemons, dark or otherwise, in which Kagome has sex with Koga, Miroku, Naraku, Shippo, bandits, Hojo, male schoolmates, or other strangers in the past or present (though I'm not partial to these as ordinary pairings). What I am totally unable to read, as ordinary pairing or lemon, dark, light or in-between, is any suggestion of a relationship and/or sex between Kagome and Sesshomaru. It's not that I can't stand reading Sesshomaru pairings - I have no problem if he's paired with Rin, Kagura, or someone else. It's particularly strange when you consider the large number of Kagome/Sesshomaru shippers out there in the fan-fiction universe.
Wednesday, December 15, 2010
Kazuma Review of 27
I just read Kazuma's review of chapter 27:
I've been keeping up with the story since it started, but i really got to say that the idea of adding Ukyo to the equation is a terrible idea. would of prefer that you killed her off, but then i just hated Ukyo in a general since since she was first introduced in the manga. I look forward to what you plan on doing but I have ideas and not too fond of 'em.
Everyone has their own tastes in characters of course. For each reader, only time will tell whether what I do with the character will be interesting or not. For what it's worth, I don't expect Ukyo to become as much a main character as, say, either Ryoga or Gosunkugi. Still, she will be around.
The real reason I'm making this post in reply to the review is because of a fascinating coincidence. Immediately prior to reading this review, I was watching an episode of the anime Kaze no Stigma on Hulu. The male protagonist of that show is named ... wait for it ... Kazuma.
I've been keeping up with the story since it started, but i really got to say that the idea of adding Ukyo to the equation is a terrible idea. would of prefer that you killed her off, but then i just hated Ukyo in a general since since she was first introduced in the manga. I look forward to what you plan on doing but I have ideas and not too fond of 'em.
Everyone has their own tastes in characters of course. For each reader, only time will tell whether what I do with the character will be interesting or not. For what it's worth, I don't expect Ukyo to become as much a main character as, say, either Ryoga or Gosunkugi. Still, she will be around.
The real reason I'm making this post in reply to the review is because of a fascinating coincidence. Immediately prior to reading this review, I was watching an episode of the anime Kaze no Stigma on Hulu. The male protagonist of that show is named ... wait for it ... Kazuma.
Tuesday, November 23, 2010
Scorpinac Review of MV 25
This is a comment on Scorpinac's review of chapter 25 of Moxibustion Violation.
Scorpinac wrote:
Somehow, I think that little boat excursion would have been more comfortable in the spring or summer time, but I digress. And Hikaru continues to gain respect, I must say. Though I must also admit to perfectly understanding his reasons. As to the close, yeah, should have seen that one coming, though sadly Ryoga covered it well. And somehow I think he's going to step things up a bit now that Soun and Genma are out of the equation for a while...though there is still Nabiki and Kasumi... Ah, well. Until chapter 26, then. Laters.
Just looked at your correction of chapter 24, and yes, that works, makes much more sense now. And since I forgot before, Ukyo really needs a shrink, doesn't she? At least she trying to control her anger, but for how long? Oh, well. Again, laters.
I definitely agree it would have been more comfortable in warmer weather. On the other hand, there would almost certainly have been other people out on the lake in that case, so likely they wouldn't have been able to get away with what they did.
Yes, Hikaru is thinking long term here.
The stuff with Ukyo in this chapter wasn't planned, the character sprung it on me. Getting rid of the fathers like that has been planned for some time. I was setting it up in the previous chapters both by revealing that Ryoga had sufficient funds for such a purpose, and with Ryoga's story about the method of curing Ranma and Akane - which now provides the excuse to send them away.
And no, there is not still Nabiki and Kasumi. Nabiki is in the U.S. now. So there is only still Kasumi. I am not planning to send Kasumi away (nor will she be gang banged by Michio and company).
Yes, Ukyo is trying to control her anger a bit. As you sense, she is unlikely to be ultimately successful.
Scorpinac wrote:
Somehow, I think that little boat excursion would have been more comfortable in the spring or summer time, but I digress. And Hikaru continues to gain respect, I must say. Though I must also admit to perfectly understanding his reasons. As to the close, yeah, should have seen that one coming, though sadly Ryoga covered it well. And somehow I think he's going to step things up a bit now that Soun and Genma are out of the equation for a while...though there is still Nabiki and Kasumi... Ah, well. Until chapter 26, then. Laters.
Just looked at your correction of chapter 24, and yes, that works, makes much more sense now. And since I forgot before, Ukyo really needs a shrink, doesn't she? At least she trying to control her anger, but for how long? Oh, well. Again, laters.
I definitely agree it would have been more comfortable in warmer weather. On the other hand, there would almost certainly have been other people out on the lake in that case, so likely they wouldn't have been able to get away with what they did.
Yes, Hikaru is thinking long term here.
The stuff with Ukyo in this chapter wasn't planned, the character sprung it on me. Getting rid of the fathers like that has been planned for some time. I was setting it up in the previous chapters both by revealing that Ryoga had sufficient funds for such a purpose, and with Ryoga's story about the method of curing Ranma and Akane - which now provides the excuse to send them away.
And no, there is not still Nabiki and Kasumi. Nabiki is in the U.S. now. So there is only still Kasumi. I am not planning to send Kasumi away (nor will she be gang banged by Michio and company).
Yes, Ukyo is trying to control her anger a bit. As you sense, she is unlikely to be ultimately successful.
Monday, November 22, 2010
MV 26 Outline
I've just finished outlining chapter 26 for Moxibustion Violation. Which unfortunately is no indication of how quickly I'll write it, considering that I had the outline for chapter 25 completed months ago.
There are two plots planned for chapter 26. The obvious one involves Ukyo, and what happens concerning her plans for revenge. The other one, about which I would be surprised if anyone can guess what it entails, sets up for certain things I have in mind for when the next school term starts. It involves character(s)/event(s) from the manga which have not previously made an appearance in MV.
There are two plots planned for chapter 26. The obvious one involves Ukyo, and what happens concerning her plans for revenge. The other one, about which I would be surprised if anyone can guess what it entails, sets up for certain things I have in mind for when the next school term starts. It involves character(s)/event(s) from the manga which have not previously made an appearance in MV.
Friday, November 12, 2010
Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 10
Ranma and Happosai meet on a sports field at Furinkan High School. The student body gathers around to watch. Cologne, Genma, Ryoga and Akane are among the spectators. Ukyo is selling okonomiyaki off of a portable grill. Happosai shows off the moxibustion chart but refuses to hand it over. He starts ironing panties, releasing not a drop of battle aura.
Everyone watches the completely still Ranma, wondering what he plans. He's thinking that he never would have resorted to this if he could have helped it. That he's casting away the last of his pride. Yet, if it's to regain his strength, then he can do it. Ranma pulls out a set of photographs and shows them to Happosai. They are photographs of Ranma, in his female (cursed) form, wearing racy lingerie. Akane realizes that the sounds she heard from inside Ranma's room came from a camera. Ukyo and Ryoga are puzzled about Ranma's "secret plan", pointing out that he has made use of his female form before in fights, particularly against Happosai. Akane points out to them that this time it's different, that before he's always had boys' underwear on under a skirt, but this is the first time he has ever deliberately worn lingerie.
Happosai is staring at the photographs, shell shocked. Tatewaki Kuno appears out of nowhere, trying to get the photographs from Ranma. On seeing this threat to the photos, a massive aura bursts forth from Happosai, as he declares that they are his! The spectators are front-lit by the aura. Cologne states, "Amazing!! So much greater than his battle aura ..." Akane adds, "His lust aura could lay waste the earth!"
Seeing Happosai and Tatewaki attacking Ranma, Mousse and Principal Kuno decide to join in on the fun. Ranma manages to lead them all into a spiral, the combined auras causing the spectators to be seen in silhouette. Akane notices as the moxibustion chart falls out of Happosai's gi. Ranma throws the uppercut which unleashes an unbelievably strong cyclone, and he watches from the ground as it sweeps his attackers upward. Then he notices that Akane is also caught in it ...
Everyone watches the completely still Ranma, wondering what he plans. He's thinking that he never would have resorted to this if he could have helped it. That he's casting away the last of his pride. Yet, if it's to regain his strength, then he can do it. Ranma pulls out a set of photographs and shows them to Happosai. They are photographs of Ranma, in his female (cursed) form, wearing racy lingerie. Akane realizes that the sounds she heard from inside Ranma's room came from a camera. Ukyo and Ryoga are puzzled about Ranma's "secret plan", pointing out that he has made use of his female form before in fights, particularly against Happosai. Akane points out to them that this time it's different, that before he's always had boys' underwear on under a skirt, but this is the first time he has ever deliberately worn lingerie.
Happosai is staring at the photographs, shell shocked. Tatewaki Kuno appears out of nowhere, trying to get the photographs from Ranma. On seeing this threat to the photos, a massive aura bursts forth from Happosai, as he declares that they are his! The spectators are front-lit by the aura. Cologne states, "Amazing!! So much greater than his battle aura ..." Akane adds, "His lust aura could lay waste the earth!"
Seeing Happosai and Tatewaki attacking Ranma, Mousse and Principal Kuno decide to join in on the fun. Ranma manages to lead them all into a spiral, the combined auras causing the spectators to be seen in silhouette. Akane notices as the moxibustion chart falls out of Happosai's gi. Ranma throws the uppercut which unleashes an unbelievably strong cyclone, and he watches from the ground as it sweeps his attackers upward. Then he notices that Akane is also caught in it ...
Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 8
A little later, we see Ryoga in a tent having a nightmare about what happened as Ukyo tends him, while outside Ranma is resting with Akane applying a Band-Aid or two to him. Cologne explains how the technique works. During her explanation Ranma disappears into the tent, to thank the unconscious Ryoga for helping him, and to tell him to rest in peace. Ryoga grabs Ranma by the throat, showing he is now awake. Ranma tries to say he was just joking. Ryoga demands, "Are you telling me you forced yourself on Akane ... as a joke!" He punches Ranma through the top of the tent while Ukyo turns to Akane with a deadly glare, hefts her battle spatula, and inquires, "And just what did Ryoga mean by that, Akane?" Akane, waving a hand up and down, sweatdropping, replies, "Th-That stupid Ranma, lying about ..." Except that Ukyo interrupts and attacks, yelling that she must have seduced him. Ranma says something insulting about this in Akane's hearing, who shoves him, then Ryoga attacks him for insulting Akane, melee ensues.
Everyone packs up and returns to Nerima. We look in on Happosai, who is stealing panties, but is feeling bored without Ranma around to interfere with him. Ranma attacks Happosai, without effect, until he manages to grab the bag of panties and throws it off the roof, emptying it. A battle aura forms around Happosai, and he prepares to take revenge on Ranma.
Everyone packs up and returns to Nerima. We look in on Happosai, who is stealing panties, but is feeling bored without Ranma around to interfere with him. Ranma attacks Happosai, without effect, until he manages to grab the bag of panties and throws it off the roof, emptying it. A battle aura forms around Happosai, and he prepares to take revenge on Ranma.
Thursday, November 11, 2010
Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 6
Cologne straps Ranma into a harness made of memory metal. The least amount of heat will make it contract, painfully. Therefore Ranma must be extremely careful not to release any battle aura, to remain absolutely ice cold. Cologne reminds Ryoga that he must not hold back. Ryoga attacks, and Ranma leads him in a perfect spiral. Except Cologne interrupts, whacking Ryoga over the head and calling him an idiot, telling him that she said not to hold back. Ryoga realizes the truth - in Ranma's weakened state Ryoga can't bring himself to truly attack him without holding back. No matter how much Ranma provokes him. Feeling like a failure, Ryoga runs off, with Ranma yelling for him to come back.
That night, Genma, Cologne, Ukyo and Akane are discussing the hopelessness of the situation. Cologne points out that a tremendous heat of battle is needed for the technique to work. This gets Akane thinking. Akane tracks down Ranma, who is off moping. Akane has donned some sort of gloves which she has set on fire. In her thinking, this will allow her to attack Ranma while providing a substitute for the battle aura of a true opponent. Ranma doesn't think this will work, and while they argue the fire spreads to Akane's gi. She jumps into a nearby pool of water, but her gi top has been destroyed, leaving her in her pants and bra. Ranma gives Akane his shirt.
Akane and Ranma get into a big argument, with Ranma telling her to go home, and Akane complaining that she just wanted to help, and he wants her to leave because she can't cook like Ukyo and isn't as strong as Ryoga. It finally reaches the point where she runs off in tears. Ranma, unable to stand her running off thinking the things she's thinking, stops her and tells her the truth. "I can't stand for you, of all people, to see me so weak and pathetic!"
At that point Ryoga shows up again. He sees Akane there, her own shirt gone and Ranma's around her shoulders unfastened. Tears on her face. He leaps to the conclusion that Ranma attempted to rape Akane. An absolutely massive battle aura blossoms around Ryoga, and he tells Ranma to "Prepare to die!"
That night, Genma, Cologne, Ukyo and Akane are discussing the hopelessness of the situation. Cologne points out that a tremendous heat of battle is needed for the technique to work. This gets Akane thinking. Akane tracks down Ranma, who is off moping. Akane has donned some sort of gloves which she has set on fire. In her thinking, this will allow her to attack Ranma while providing a substitute for the battle aura of a true opponent. Ranma doesn't think this will work, and while they argue the fire spreads to Akane's gi. She jumps into a nearby pool of water, but her gi top has been destroyed, leaving her in her pants and bra. Ranma gives Akane his shirt.
Akane and Ranma get into a big argument, with Ranma telling her to go home, and Akane complaining that she just wanted to help, and he wants her to leave because she can't cook like Ukyo and isn't as strong as Ryoga. It finally reaches the point where she runs off in tears. Ranma, unable to stand her running off thinking the things she's thinking, stops her and tells her the truth. "I can't stand for you, of all people, to see me so weak and pathetic!"
At that point Ryoga shows up again. He sees Akane there, her own shirt gone and Ranma's around her shoulders unfastened. Tears on her face. He leaps to the conclusion that Ranma attempted to rape Akane. An absolutely massive battle aura blossoms around Ryoga, and he tells Ranma to "Prepare to die!"
Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 5
The first part of Ranma's training is to defend himself from attack while leading his opponent(s) in an inward spiral. Genma, Akane and Ukyo act as his opponents. Except that instead of physical attacks, Genma pulls out a photograph of a very young Ranma, crying, standing beside a wet bed sheet (i.e., he wet it the previous night). A mortified Ranma attempts (unsuccessfully) to prevent Ukyo and Akane from seeing it. Genma next pulls out a photograph of a naked teenage Ranma falling out of a barrel in which he was bathing, because a cat frightened him (Ranma is morbidly afraid of cats). Ukyo pleads with Genma to move his thumb, which is covering Ranma's groin. An extremely red-faced Akane claims that she doesn't want to look, while looking out the corner of her eyes. Ranma is jumping around, demanding that Genma cut it out.
Cologne smacks Ranma over the head, and shows him that he didn't even come close to leading them in a spiral. She tells him that he must not be embarrassed, he must not be angry, he must master the Soul of Ice. He must make the spiral with an icy heart. We see Ryoga in the vicinity, but he does not yet make his appearance. Finally, Ranma masters the ability to lead his opponents in a spiral with an ice cold demeanor.
Cologne then tells Akane and Ukyo to pack up and leave. Cologne points out that for the next part of the training, Ranma needs an opponent on whom he will be willing to unleash the final blast. Ranma realizes that she's right, that he can't do that to Akane or Ukyo.
At that point, Ryoga shows up and offers to be Ranma's opponent for the training, having overheard this last bit. Ranma, surprised, asks, "You came all the way out here for me?" Ryoga answers, "Of course not!" and Akane thinks to herself, "Don't tell me he got lost again."
Cologne smacks Ranma over the head, and shows him that he didn't even come close to leading them in a spiral. She tells him that he must not be embarrassed, he must not be angry, he must master the Soul of Ice. He must make the spiral with an icy heart. We see Ryoga in the vicinity, but he does not yet make his appearance. Finally, Ranma masters the ability to lead his opponents in a spiral with an ice cold demeanor.
Cologne then tells Akane and Ukyo to pack up and leave. Cologne points out that for the next part of the training, Ranma needs an opponent on whom he will be willing to unleash the final blast. Ranma realizes that she's right, that he can't do that to Akane or Ukyo.
At that point, Ryoga shows up and offers to be Ranma's opponent for the training, having overheard this last bit. Ranma, surprised, asks, "You came all the way out here for me?" Ryoga answers, "Of course not!" and Akane thinks to herself, "Don't tell me he got lost again."
Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 4
On learning at school that not only Ranma is absent, but also Ukyo, Akane pays a visit to Ucchan's restaurant. There she finds a notice that the restaurant is temporarily closed and where Ukyo is currently located. So Akane packs a backpack, and heads off to join them in Yomogi Valley (the moxibustion capital). Ranma and his father are out there training in an attempt to find a way for Ranma to recover his strength. Ukyo was asked along to cook for them, since she's a chef (and happy for the chance for some time with Ranma). Naturally they wouldn't have asked Akane to come for such a reason, since her cooking tends to be poisonous.
Genma concludes that their training there is useless, and they need to focus on getting the chart back from Happosai. He trains Ranma in a new technique to do so, called the Crouch of the Wild Tiger. It turns out to be a technique for apologizing. Ranma is incensed. At that point Cologne shows up, also wishing to cure her future great-grandson-in-law (we earlier learned that her great-granddaughter Shampoo is currently back in China on a visit).
Cologne proceeds to demonstrate a technique she thinks Ranma could use, even in his weakened state, to defeat Happosai. It is called the Hiryū Shōten Ha, and it goes on in the manga to become one of Ranma's strongest techniques in its various forms. Akane sees a blast in the distance, and Ranma lands hard right in front of her. Ranma leaps to his feet without noticing her, saying how amazing that technique is, and that he'll be able to defeat the old pervert. Cologne informs the charred Genma that she applied the technique at 20% of full power, and that the power of the technique is dependent on the power of the opponent. (Happosai is very powerful.)
Ranma announces that he'll master the technique in three days.
Genma concludes that their training there is useless, and they need to focus on getting the chart back from Happosai. He trains Ranma in a new technique to do so, called the Crouch of the Wild Tiger. It turns out to be a technique for apologizing. Ranma is incensed. At that point Cologne shows up, also wishing to cure her future great-grandson-in-law (we earlier learned that her great-granddaughter Shampoo is currently back in China on a visit).
Cologne proceeds to demonstrate a technique she thinks Ranma could use, even in his weakened state, to defeat Happosai. It is called the Hiryū Shōten Ha, and it goes on in the manga to become one of Ranma's strongest techniques in its various forms. Akane sees a blast in the distance, and Ranma lands hard right in front of her. Ranma leaps to his feet without noticing her, saying how amazing that technique is, and that he'll be able to defeat the old pervert. Cologne informs the charred Genma that she applied the technique at 20% of full power, and that the power of the technique is dependent on the power of the opponent. (Happosai is very powerful.)
Ranma announces that he'll master the technique in three days.
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