Special Sauce

For this cartoon idea, Akane and Ranma are sitting out in the schoolyard of Furinkan High School. They are eating their lunches out of bento boxes, and seem to be doing so with great pleasure. Akane comments to Ranma, "I wonder what this sauce is that Kasumi used today?" Ranma, in female form for some reason, replies, "Yeah! It tastes really great!"

Meanwhile, Hikaru Gosunkugi is standing behind a tree, which is itself in the background behind Akane and Ranma. He has his huge cock hanging out, mostly limp, holding it with one hand. A knowing look is on his face, and semen is dripping from the end of his prick.

(Presumably Akane and Ranma were distracted for a few minutes a short time ago. Perhaps they had to beat up Kuno or something, while the sauce was being added to their lunches.)

Romeos and Juliet

This cartoon idea is set in the auditorium at Furinkan High School, with the point of view from backstage toward the audience. The background shows a packed auditorium, the audience filling all of the seats. In the foreground on the stage is Akane Tendo dressed as Juliet, and surrounded by four males all of whom are dressed as Romeo, specifically Tatewaki Kuno, Hikaru Gosunkugi, Happosai, and Ranma Saotome. The four Romeos are all fully dressed except that their cocks are sticking out of their pants. Akane's Juliet dress is pushed up to her armpits, and any undergarments are removed (except for stockings), fully revealing her ass, pussy, and tits, while leaving her face uncovered.

Kuno is lying on his back on the stage. Akane is straddling Kuno with her back to him, leaning backward over his chest, and with Kuno's cock visibly impaling her ass. Gosunkugi is kneeling in front of Akane, fucking her cunt. Happosai is standing to one side of Akane's head, either with Akane blowing him, or else holding her hair and fucking her mouth (or maybe the viewer can't really tell which of these two is the case). The male Ranma is on Akane's far side, getting his dick stroked by Akane's hand, and looking disappointed that he isn't taking one of the other guys' places in one of Akane's three holes. Gosunkugi is saying to the other three, "Remember! Whoever cums the most before going soft gets the prize of a trip to China with Tendo-san!"

Variations would rearrange which guy is in which hole, and which guy says the line above. Although I think Ranma should stay in the position indicated above. Another variation would leave Akane out entirely (or have her tied up and glaring off to the side), with female Ranma as Juliet, and adding Ryoga Hibiki as the fourth male, with either Gosunkugi or Kuno as the disappointed fellow only getting a handjob.

Paper Doll Blowjob

The setting for this cartoon is an empty classroom. Hikaru Gosunkugi is sitting in a chair with the pants of his school uniform down around his ankles, and a blissful expression on his face. A nude Akane Tendo is kneeling in front of Gosunkugi, giving him a blowjob. A paper doll is on her back. A male and clothed Ranma Saotome is kneeling beside the other two, filming the blowjob with a video camera. A paper doll is also on his back. Akane's uniform and underclothes are scattered on the floor, with a paper doll on the back of the uniform. There are lines leading from the three paper dolls to insets placed around the edges of the cartoon. Each inset shows the body of the corresponding paper doll and a message which was written within the doll. In the inset for the doll on the back of Akane's uniform, we can read the message, "Happily strip for Gosunkugi-kun, and show him your body." In the inset for the doll on Akane's bare back we can read the message, "Give Gosunkugi-kun a great blowjob, and swallow his semen." Finally, in the inset for the doll on Ranma's back is the message, "Record Tendo-san's blowjob, and give the video to Gosunkugi-kun."

My idea behind the two paper dolls for Akane is that I wanted her nude for the blowjob, but once her uniform came off, I was afraid the doll placed on her uniform might cease to affect her. But hopefully the command on the doll would not lose affect instantaneously. So as Akane stripped, as soon as her bare back was available, Gosunkugi would have slapped on the second doll.

If I were to write a story based on the magic paper dolls, I would have Gosunkugi write on them under a large magnifying glass in very tiny print, so that he could include lots of commands. And some of those commands would be worded so as to force all of the other commands to have permanent effect. Also, the first person he should target should be an extremely high level martial artist like Ranma or Happosai, with some foolproof plan to make sure he succeeds, and then afterward use that martial artist to place any further paper dolls on people's backs.

Shampoo gives Akane a choice

One of my favorite bondage pictures of Akane:

Akane captured by Shampoo, photographed by Gosunkugi.

Curiously, I don't imagine Shampoo is expecting to do anything particularly nasty to Akane in this scene. She is fondling Akane, and she's allowing Gosunkugi to take pictures of her in a state of bondage (but fully clothed). No doubt Gosunkugi is going to sell copies of those photographs to the boys at school, which is certainly sufficient to be terribly mortifying for Akane. Shampoo has already informed her captive that this is a punishment for getting between Shampoo and her airen.

But what Shampoo is currently explaining to Akane is her present choice. Either Akane can give up on Ranma permanently, and swear on her honor she will do so. Or, Shampoo will invite the hentai horde over while Akane is still bound there, and leave her to their mercy (of which they cannot be expected to have any). Shampoo is confident that the trembling girl who can barely contemplate hugging her fiance will choose the former, removing a troublesome rival. But in reality Akane is seriously considering the second choice, hoping against hope that the boys won't do anything too perverted, or that Ranma will show up in time and rescue her, or that Shampoo will have a last minute change of heart and not go through with it. Or something.

If I were writing it, I think I'd have Shampoo shocked at Akane's decision, and then angry. She would talk herself into going through with it. But I'd go for a less brutal touch than MV. The boys would molest Akane pretty seriously, fondling her, peeking at the goodies, maybe a little bukkake. But Ranma would in fact arrive before they could decide whether they're willing to do anything more severe than that.

Hmm, and maybe after chasing the boys off (with significant injuries), the sight of Akane hanging there, clothing disarranged, covered in semen, would awaken something in Ranma. I'm sure he would need to comfort her afterward. And with one thing leading to another, he would comfort her very thoroughly the whole night long.

And maybe later Akane and Ukyo would team up to stake Shampoo out for a taste of her own medicine.

Scorpinac Review of MV 25

This is a comment on Scorpinac's review of chapter 25 of Moxibustion Violation.

Scorpinac wrote:
Somehow, I think that little boat excursion would have been more comfortable in the spring or summer time, but I digress. And Hikaru continues to gain respect, I must say. Though I must also admit to perfectly understanding his reasons. As to the close, yeah, should have seen that one coming, though sadly Ryoga covered it well. And somehow I think he's going to step things up a bit now that Soun and Genma are out of the equation for a while...though there is still Nabiki and Kasumi... Ah, well. Until chapter 26, then. Laters.

Just looked at your correction of chapter 24, and yes, that works, makes much more sense now. And since I forgot before, Ukyo really needs a shrink, doesn't she? At least she trying to control her anger, but for how long? Oh, well. Again, laters.

I definitely agree it would have been more comfortable in warmer weather. On the other hand, there would almost certainly have been other people out on the lake in that case, so likely they wouldn't have been able to get away with what they did.

Yes, Hikaru is thinking long term here.

The stuff with Ukyo in this chapter wasn't planned, the character sprung it on me. Getting rid of the fathers like that has been planned for some time. I was setting it up in the previous chapters both by revealing that Ryoga had sufficient funds for such a purpose, and with Ryoga's story about the method of curing Ranma and Akane - which now provides the excuse to send them away.

And no, there is not still Nabiki and Kasumi. Nabiki is in the U.S. now. So there is only still Kasumi. I am not planning to send Kasumi away (nor will she be gang banged by Michio and company).

Yes, Ukyo is trying to control her anger a bit. As you sense, she is unlikely to be ultimately successful.

Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 2

Akane attacks Happosai while he is ironing some stolen panties, demanding that he tell her how to cure the ultimate weakness moxibustion. Her father Soun Tendo overhears, and starts choking Happosai for what he has done to the dojo's heir (one of the few times in the manga that Soun or Genma manage to get the better of Happosai). He releases the old man when his daughter Kasumi suggests that he stop before he kills him, but then Soun also demands the cure.

Happosai's reply is, "Fool! Have you forgotten who I am? In my entire rotten life, have I ever once learned a technique that could actually help anyone?!" He is kicked into the air as they realize he doesn't know the cure.

In the meantime, Ranma is tied up in the P.E. equipment shed at school. Akane, who saw the Happy-Grams, did this to keep Ranma, who would refuse to hide, from being killed by his rivals. Hikaru Gosunkugi finds Ranma and unties him. Puzzled, Ranma asks, "Aren't you one of the guys with a grudge against me?" Hikaru replies, "Who, me?" He then shoves Ranma out the door, saying, "No. I'll just wait until the others are finished." The others turn out to be Principal Kuno, Mousse and Tatewaki, who proceed to beat up on Ranma, but also get in each others way preventing any overly serious blow from landing.

Just as they are about to all strike at once, they are all knocked away. By Ryoga. Ranma says, "What ... you're saving me for yourself?" Ryoga replies, "Don't insult me! I can't stand people who pick on the weak!" Ranma is quite upset on hearing this, and attacks Ryoga, uselessly.

Akane visits Doctor Tofu, whose office looks like a disaster, covered in books and scrolls. He tells her that there is a chance of a cure, a chart in a remote hiding place which shows the moxibustion to counter the ultimate weakness moxibustion.

Ukyo finds Ranma. She tells him that she'll take care of him, that all he'll have to do for the rest of his life is watch over their children. She points out that in his weak state, he can't be the heir of the Tendo dojo, so his engagement to Akane has no point, leaving only his engagement to herself. Ranma, upset, says the only thing on his mind is getting his strength back, that he doesn't care about the dojo. Naturally, at that precise moment Akane had walked in behind him.

Akane hits Ranma over the head, telling him that she came to tell him about a possible cure, but just see if she'll tell him now. Ranma proceeds to fawn all over Akane, massaging her shoulders, etc., while she repeats, "I'm not telling." Ukyo looks on in disbelief at his antics.

Chapter 24 Progress 2

I managed to write some more on chapter 24 today. In fact, enough that I could probably post it as a chapter, if I was willing to post it as a short chapter which doesn't go as far as I'd like. So I doubt that I will. There's stuff in the next scene or two that I would prefer to have in the chapter before I post it. It's a balance between my wish to get stuff out there for my readers to enjoy versus my wish to have the chapter feel complete to me.

One of the things that I have to remember is to let Jikiru (Jekyll) out once in a while. Ryoga can't stay in his Haido (Hyde) persona full time.

It amuses me how some reviewers think I have this deep, involved plan where Gosunkugi is concerned. Truthfully, I do have a plan, and have a feel for where I want him to be at the end of the story. But Gosunkugi's plan for Akane and Ranma is dynamically evolving as the story progresses. I.e., his character is letting me in on the plan just a little bit ahead of my readers.