Hentai Foundry

I decided to post my story Examination on Hentai Foundry to see if additional people might come across it there, and whether it might be a good forum for generating comments. I'm not sure how it will work out, since I think of H.F. mostly as an art site as opposed to a fanfic site. If it does work out well, I might see about adding Moxibustion Violation there as well.

Unfortunately, they don't tell you anything about the format they use for the text. I tried doing a copy and paste from the story as it appeared in my browser (the AssTR version), which looked just fine in the edit window. Then when I saved it, the whole thing turned into one huge block of run-on text. It was a bit of a pain getting it to look more-or-less right. If I do post any more there, I'll have to find out more about the formatting, so I can automate the process somewhat.

Pariah's Review

Regarding Pariah's review of Examination:

Hehe. Well played.

I guess you needed a break from the drama and moodiness. Good outcome.

I suppose the only criticism I have is that the sexual description was lacking. But, as you say, I suppose too much emphasis on that would ruin the clinical decorum.

I was half expecting them to do an anal exam after her preliminary stretching. But I suppose expanding beyond the humiliation aspect of having a sexual toy up her ass would be pushing it.

I don't know whether I needed a break or not. But inspiration hit, and I had to surrender to it. Sorry about the lack of sexual description, but it seemed right at the time. For that matter, I still think it's right.

I did consider doing some more anally, but decided against it. Porn or not, I felt it would stretch the scenario too far for the film crew to get away with clearly anal procedures. After all, it was supposed to be an examination by a gynecologist, not a gastroenterologist.

Examination Posted

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Examination Draft 1

I've just finished the first draft of the story mentioned in my two previous posts, Examination. Now I need to go back and clean it up, get it ready for posting. Which will hopefully take place sometime tomorrow (Sunday).

Today I came across an announcement of a possible Ranma lemon contest on the following forum:

http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=20333

I'm feeling a little sad that the contest hasn't started, since I feel that this story would be perfect for an entry in it. However, I have no intention to withhold posting the story just to try to submit to this contest, assuming they can even get it off the ground anytime soon.

Good Progress

I've almost finished that story I wrote about in my last post, although by "finished" I mean finished the initial writing. I'd still have to go back through and clean it up.

Of course, now the work week is starting and we're still putting in some overtime even though I didn't have to work this weekend. So I'm not sure just how quickly I can finish the thing. Still, I'm hopeful that I'll be able to post it by the end of next weekend at the latest.

Then I need to get back to Moxibustion Violation.

Interlude

Afraid I'm not posting to report progress on MV, although I promise to get back to it real-soon-now. The problem is, I got inspired to write a one-shot, and I'm already about halfway through it. It'll be solely about female Ranma, in the hands of some people who are taking advantage of her. Nonconsensual, technically, but not dark. Certainly not like MV, anyway.

I suppose I might have been inspired by some of the recent stuff appearing on nonktube. I'll leave you to ponder the possibilities that might suggest.