Alternate Mother

The setting for this cartoon idea is inside the Tendo dojo. A slightly older Akane Saotome née Tendo is standing to one side wearing either a gi or casual clothing. She is holding a baby boy with black hair, although the hair may perhaps have a bluish tint. Female Ranma — also looking slightly older — is nude and down on the wooden floor of the dojo, either on hands and knees or on elbows and knees. Ranma is restrained in some manner, such as ropes around wrists and knees, or in some other manner. Ranma's face is turned upward to look at Akane with a beseeching expression, as if she has just asked a question related to her horror over her current situation. Ryoga Hibiki is kneeling behind Ranma, fucking her enthusiastically with an enormous prick.

Akane is saying to Ranma, "Because there's no way that I'm going through another pregnancy — let alone a repeat of that 11 hour hell of childbirth! Since it's your mother who's insisting on having at least four grandchildren, then you can be the one to give her the others! That's why!"

Everyone is Taken

In this cartoon idea, Ranma is standing in the door of Akane's bedroom with his jaw hanging. He is holding, currently disregarded, a bouquet of flowers in one hand, and an open box showing an engagement ring in the other hand. Akane is on her bed, naked, straddling and fucking Ryu Kumon (the guy who once pretended to be Ranma to Ranma's mother Nodoka). Akane says over her shoulder to Ranma, "It's not my fault you waited so long to make up your mind. All of us got tired of waiting and made our own choices."

In small images around the edges of the cartoon frame, we see the following:
Shampoo fucking Mousse.
Ukyo fucking Ryoga.
Kodachi fucking her brother Tatewaki.
Kasumi fucking Doctor Tofu.
Nabiki having lesbian sex with the adult Hinako Ninomiya, a bowl containing fighting fish beside them to keep her adult.

This cartoon could obviously be varied by swapping the couples around to fit an individual's personal tastes.

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That's the last of the cartoon ideas I had ready to post. Actually, the last few were ones I came up with after I originally started posting this series. So it's quite possible that I'll add still more later on.

Cursed Cave Exit

The setting for this cartoon idea is on the outside of the exit to the Cursed Cave of Broken Loves. Akane and Ranma are no longer anywhere in sight. Ukyo is being held down, stripped, and raped by a crowd of male ghosts. She currently has ghost cocks in her cunt, her mouth, and a least one hand. Possibly also a ghost cock in her ass, but I don't want to block too much of the view of her body, so if so, then any ghost in front should be mostly transparent. In the meanwhile, Ryoga is being restrained by the female ghosts, so that he cannot come to Ukyo's aid. One female ghost has a hand down Ryoga's pants, and there is an obvious bulge in his pants. One of the ghosts is saying, "This is the real way that we break up couples!"

Shishi Hokodan Perfected

This cartoon idea is taken from the Shishi Hokodan arc of the manga. The setting is on the grounds of Furinkan High School with a very large but shallow crater in the center of the image. This crater is surrounded by a crowd of students, and both Akane and Cologne are in the crowd near the edge. A depressed Ryoga is standing at the crater center, his arms lowered near his sides with his fists curled upward. Lines of force surrounding Ryoga illustrate the chi force of the Shishi Hokodan falling heavily around himself and Ranma. Ranma, in female form, is standing near Ryoga, struggling to stay on her feet under the downward impact of the chi attack. All of Ranma's clothes have been torn off by the chi force, with the fragments of cloth being driven down toward the ground.

And Ryoga is shouting, "Shishi Hokodan, Perfected!"

Stealing Waterproof Soap

The scene for this cartoon idea is set beside a pool of water at a water park. A nude female Ranma and a nude Shampoo are lathered up, and rubbing their bodies against a nude Ryoga. Ryoga is practically catatonic — his arms are out to the sides, with thumbs, index, and pinky fingers extended, and the other fingers curled in. Ranma is saying to Shampoo, "Okay! Grab that waterproof soap now!"

The three could be in various poses to meet the description above. For example, Ryoga could be sitting, with Shampoo's tits pressed against his back, and Ranma's tits engulfing Ryoga's cock. Another possibility would be Ryoga reclining on his back, with Shampoo's tits wrapped around his cock, and Ryoga's face pressed between Ranma's tits. Ryoga's cock could even be inserted into one of various orifices, so long as it's not the mouth of the girl who is speaking. Although I think penetration may be a step too far, as it shouldn't be necessary in order to achieve the necessary impact on Ryoga.

Fishing Pole Wedding

The setting for this cartoon idea is a wedding ceremony, probably being held in the Tendo Dojo. Somewhere to the side or in the background a fishing pole is leaning against a wall. The attendees to the wedding should include many/most members of the cast, plus several Furinkan High School students. The bride is a very pregnant female Ranma, in a wedding dress which is cut low and shows a large carp tattoo on her left tit. The groom is a frantic Ryoga in a tuxedo. Behind Ryoga is Ranma's mother Nodoka, in formal Japanese wedding attire of the sort to be worn by the bride's mother. Nodoka is holding the point of a katana at Ryoga's back. Ranma looks very smug.

Ryoga is pleading, "But I keep telling you! I didn't force her! She forced me!"

Ryoga Spanks Yoiko

This cartoon idea should be virtually a copy of the frame in which Ryoga spanks Ranma, who is pretending to be Ryoga's younger sister Yoiko. This may be found in the VIZ translation in volume 9, chapter 9, at the top of page 137, or in the original Japanese volume 11, chapter 3, at the top of page 39. Akane is sitting nearby, still holding her cards from the game they were playing, while Ryoga has pulled Yoiko/Ranma over his knees and is spanking her bottom. As in the manga, it would have Ryoga saying, "Bad Yoiko! I guess a big brother just has to be strict sometimes!" Yoiko/Ranma would be making a howling noise and crying tears. What I would change from the manga is for Ranma's pants to be pulled down with her ass very red from the spanking, and her shirt to be pulled up exposing her tits, instead of being spanked with all of her clothing in place.

Edit: In the original cartoon, Yoiko/Ranma is wearing a jumper over a blouse, not pants and shirt. So while the above with pants and shirt would be fine, a version closer to the original might have the jumper pulled off entirely, panties pulled down, the blouse pulled up, and still wearing the black thigh-high socks/stockings she was shown wearing.

Ladies of the Tendo-Ke Volume 0

A doujinshi was recently put up on E-Hentai Galleries which purports to be a Volume 0 of The Ladies of the Tendo-Ke. I've come across other volumes under that title before, but I don't recall seeing this one. It's in Spanish, and I haven't been able to locate an English translation.

http://g.e-hentai.org/g/862174/900bb5468b/

The basic story seems to be that Akane takes P-chan to bed with her. The little pig, feeling amorous, manages to work himself into Akane's clothes, loosening them while doing so. He helps to get her off, but then gets all depressed when she makes it apparent that she's dreaming of Ranma while he's doing this.

Like a Beast

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Ryoga spanking Ranma

Picture of Ryoga spanking Yoiko-Ranma

Remember the arc where Akane visited Ryoga's house, and Ranma pretended to be Ryoga's non-existent little sister Yoiko? I can easily imagine that Ryoga realized it was Ranma, and used it as an excuse to give her a very, very thorough paddling. Right in front of Akane. A much more intense punishment than in canon, one which would leave Ranma bawling, begging for mercy, and promising to be a good little girl from now on.

And Ranma would have to live with the embarrassment of knowing that Akane and Ryoga both remember this spanking. And that they both know - although perhaps Akane was only certain afterward - that it was Ranma whom Ryoga was spanking.

Shampoo Lemon Partner

(Related to a conversation I had with T H Tiger.)

I don't plan to bring the Joketsuzoku into my story Moxibustion Violation. However, I will hopefully finish that story someday, and I have a number of ideas for other stories I'd like to write. Some of them involve Shampoo getting her just desserts.

This brings up my ideas on who would be an appropriate person to give her what she deserves — i.e., overpower her by means physical or magical and then screw her brains out. There are several characters I would consider for the purpose.

On the martial artist side (subduing her physically) are Mousse and Ryoga. It was suggested that a lot of people would say "anybody except Mousse" for such a purpose, but personally I'd be perfectly happy using him for such. Of course, it is a prerequisite that he first grow a set of balls where Shampoo is concerned, but I don't see that as a major stumbling block. Another possibility, especially if the story is set in China, would be Pantyhose Taro. Kuno, on the other hand, I can't really see performing this task.

As for non martial artists (subduing her magically or by some other non-physical means) the leaders of the pack would be Hiroshi and Daisuke. Or possibly just anonymous boys from the school.

I can see Happosai in the role of facilitator, helping to set Shampoo up because she (or Cologne) did something to piss him off. I don't think I'd want him to participate however.

The one male that I really wouldn't be particularly interested to have teach Shampoo her lesson would be the title character, Ranma himself. He could do it, of course, and I can easily imagine scenarios where he would. I just wouldn't be very interested in writing them. Ditto the lack of interest in writing something where Akane, Ukyo and/or Kodachi turn the tables on Shampoo and make her pay in some sexual manner. It's not that I have a problem with such stories, and in fact could certainly enjoy reading them, but I don't feel any inclination toward them as an author.

Just a little insight into where my biases lie.

Thoughts on 28

Spoilers here for chapter 28.

Just some thoughts on the chapter now that it's up, and I've received a few reviews.

I had been considering bring Kodachi into the story eventually, although not necessarily as another molester, and this was definitely sooner than my original intent. However, it did give me the opportunity to set up a few things, in a way which might have worked better than the approach I first planned. A couple that I can reveal right now - first, I could let Ryoga's Jekyll side out for a while and even allow him to be tortured in a minor way, to remind everyone that he still exists inside the guy. Second, this provided a means to keep Ryoga away overnight, which is the night of the New Year, a very important night in Japanese culture and one where Gosunkugi had extracted a promise from Akane regarding what she'll be doing at midnight.

Neither of those things required Kodachi, but I wanted Ryoga with someone, and it was too soon for him to play with Ukyo again. Putting Kodachi in the scene also allowed me to set up something that I haven't fully made up my mind about, but if I go with it, it should slowly emerge over several upcoming chapters.

As for the question from "Anon" as to whether I will bring Shampoo into Haido's clutches, the answer is no. The Joketsuzoku are in China, will stay in China, and will not be appearing in the story. They - particularly Cologne - would be too upsetting to the balance of power, both as it exists right now, and where I want it to end up. I don't object in principle to their presence in Ranma porn, and may even use them in some future story, if I ever manage to finish writing this one.

Next chapter should have the night of the New Year (back at the Tendos), the morning after for Ryoga and Kodachi, Ryoga's return to the Tendo home, and more of the dragon's whisker saga.

Scorpinac Review of MV 25

This is a comment on Scorpinac's review of chapter 25 of Moxibustion Violation.

Scorpinac wrote:
Somehow, I think that little boat excursion would have been more comfortable in the spring or summer time, but I digress. And Hikaru continues to gain respect, I must say. Though I must also admit to perfectly understanding his reasons. As to the close, yeah, should have seen that one coming, though sadly Ryoga covered it well. And somehow I think he's going to step things up a bit now that Soun and Genma are out of the equation for a while...though there is still Nabiki and Kasumi... Ah, well. Until chapter 26, then. Laters.

Just looked at your correction of chapter 24, and yes, that works, makes much more sense now. And since I forgot before, Ukyo really needs a shrink, doesn't she? At least she trying to control her anger, but for how long? Oh, well. Again, laters.

I definitely agree it would have been more comfortable in warmer weather. On the other hand, there would almost certainly have been other people out on the lake in that case, so likely they wouldn't have been able to get away with what they did.

Yes, Hikaru is thinking long term here.

The stuff with Ukyo in this chapter wasn't planned, the character sprung it on me. Getting rid of the fathers like that has been planned for some time. I was setting it up in the previous chapters both by revealing that Ryoga had sufficient funds for such a purpose, and with Ryoga's story about the method of curing Ranma and Akane - which now provides the excuse to send them away.

And no, there is not still Nabiki and Kasumi. Nabiki is in the U.S. now. So there is only still Kasumi. I am not planning to send Kasumi away (nor will she be gang banged by Michio and company).

Yes, Ukyo is trying to control her anger a bit. As you sense, she is unlikely to be ultimately successful.

Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 8

A little later, we see Ryoga in a tent having a nightmare about what happened as Ukyo tends him, while outside Ranma is resting with Akane applying a Band-Aid or two to him. Cologne explains how the technique works. During her explanation Ranma disappears into the tent, to thank the unconscious Ryoga for helping him, and to tell him to rest in peace. Ryoga grabs Ranma by the throat, showing he is now awake. Ranma tries to say he was just joking. Ryoga demands, "Are you telling me you forced yourself on Akane ... as a joke!" He punches Ranma through the top of the tent while Ukyo turns to Akane with a deadly glare, hefts her battle spatula, and inquires, "And just what did Ryoga mean by that, Akane?" Akane, waving a hand up and down, sweatdropping, replies, "Th-That stupid Ranma, lying about ..." Except that Ukyo interrupts and attacks, yelling that she must have seduced him. Ranma says something insulting about this in Akane's hearing, who shoves him, then Ryoga attacks him for insulting Akane, melee ensues.

Everyone packs up and returns to Nerima. We look in on Happosai, who is stealing panties, but is feeling bored without Ranma around to interfere with him. Ranma attacks Happosai, without effect, until he manages to grab the bag of panties and throws it off the roof, emptying it. A battle aura forms around Happosai, and he prepares to take revenge on Ranma.

Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 7

Ranma, looking at the enraged Ryoga, thinks about the fact that for his training he needs Ryoga to fight him all out. So he interrupts Akane, who is trying to explain to Ryoga that Ranma didn't do anything, and Ranma says, "I'm sorry, Akane ... It's just that ... you looked so ... so beautiful ..." Akane grows wide-eyed, not believing what she's hearing. Ranma adds, "I couldn't help forcing myself on you! Well, what's done is done, so I'm not going to make a big deal about it." Akane's head is swiveling back and forth between Ranma and Ryoga, and she uselessly attempts to protest that Ranma is lying. Ryoga attacks Ranma with deadly intent.

At first Ranma is unsuccessful at leading Ryoga in a spiral and is getting pulverized. Akane is crying, begging Ryoga not to kill him. Ranma yells at her to stay out of it, not to interfere in his training. Cologne shows up and points out to Akane what Ranma is doing, as he finally succeeds in maneuvering through the spiral. Then Cologne realizes that she never taught Ranma the final move, and Akane screams "What?!" at her. But Ranma figures it out on his own, throwing the corkscrew uppercut which takes the spirals of icy and superheated air and transforms them into a whirlwind. One so strong, that Cologne and Akane are nearly sucked into it, although Ranma at its very center is mostly unscathed aside from his clothing being torn up a bit. The unconscious Ryoga lands a long distance off, beside Ukyo and Genma.

Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 6

Cologne straps Ranma into a harness made of memory metal. The least amount of heat will make it contract, painfully. Therefore Ranma must be extremely careful not to release any battle aura, to remain absolutely ice cold. Cologne reminds Ryoga that he must not hold back. Ryoga attacks, and Ranma leads him in a perfect spiral. Except Cologne interrupts, whacking Ryoga over the head and calling him an idiot, telling him that she said not to hold back. Ryoga realizes the truth - in Ranma's weakened state Ryoga can't bring himself to truly attack him without holding back. No matter how much Ranma provokes him. Feeling like a failure, Ryoga runs off, with Ranma yelling for him to come back.

That night, Genma, Cologne, Ukyo and Akane are discussing the hopelessness of the situation. Cologne points out that a tremendous heat of battle is needed for the technique to work. This gets Akane thinking. Akane tracks down Ranma, who is off moping. Akane has donned some sort of gloves which she has set on fire. In her thinking, this will allow her to attack Ranma while providing a substitute for the battle aura of a true opponent. Ranma doesn't think this will work, and while they argue the fire spreads to Akane's gi. She jumps into a nearby pool of water, but her gi top has been destroyed, leaving her in her pants and bra. Ranma gives Akane his shirt.

Akane and Ranma get into a big argument, with Ranma telling her to go home, and Akane complaining that she just wanted to help, and he wants her to leave because she can't cook like Ukyo and isn't as strong as Ryoga. It finally reaches the point where she runs off in tears. Ranma, unable to stand her running off thinking the things she's thinking, stops her and tells her the truth. "I can't stand for you, of all people, to see me so weak and pathetic!"

At that point Ryoga shows up again. He sees Akane there, her own shirt gone and Ranma's around her shoulders unfastened. Tears on her face. He leaps to the conclusion that Ranma attempted to rape Akane. An absolutely massive battle aura blossoms around Ryoga, and he tells Ranma to "Prepare to die!"

Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 5

The first part of Ranma's training is to defend himself from attack while leading his opponent(s) in an inward spiral. Genma, Akane and Ukyo act as his opponents. Except that instead of physical attacks, Genma pulls out a photograph of a very young Ranma, crying, standing beside a wet bed sheet (i.e., he wet it the previous night). A mortified Ranma attempts (unsuccessfully) to prevent Ukyo and Akane from seeing it. Genma next pulls out a photograph of a naked teenage Ranma falling out of a barrel in which he was bathing, because a cat frightened him (Ranma is morbidly afraid of cats). Ukyo pleads with Genma to move his thumb, which is covering Ranma's groin. An extremely red-faced Akane claims that she doesn't want to look, while looking out the corner of her eyes. Ranma is jumping around, demanding that Genma cut it out.

Cologne smacks Ranma over the head, and shows him that he didn't even come close to leading them in a spiral. She tells him that he must not be embarrassed, he must not be angry, he must master the Soul of Ice. He must make the spiral with an icy heart. We see Ryoga in the vicinity, but he does not yet make his appearance. Finally, Ranma masters the ability to lead his opponents in a spiral with an ice cold demeanor.

Cologne then tells Akane and Ukyo to pack up and leave. Cologne points out that for the next part of the training, Ranma needs an opponent on whom he will be willing to unleash the final blast. Ranma realizes that she's right, that he can't do that to Akane or Ukyo.

At that point, Ryoga shows up and offers to be Ranma's opponent for the training, having overheard this last bit. Ranma, surprised, asks, "You came all the way out here for me?" Ryoga answers, "Of course not!" and Akane thinks to herself, "Don't tell me he got lost again."

Ultimate Weakness Moxibustion - Chapter 2

Akane attacks Happosai while he is ironing some stolen panties, demanding that he tell her how to cure the ultimate weakness moxibustion. Her father Soun Tendo overhears, and starts choking Happosai for what he has done to the dojo's heir (one of the few times in the manga that Soun or Genma manage to get the better of Happosai). He releases the old man when his daughter Kasumi suggests that he stop before he kills him, but then Soun also demands the cure.

Happosai's reply is, "Fool! Have you forgotten who I am? In my entire rotten life, have I ever once learned a technique that could actually help anyone?!" He is kicked into the air as they realize he doesn't know the cure.

In the meantime, Ranma is tied up in the P.E. equipment shed at school. Akane, who saw the Happy-Grams, did this to keep Ranma, who would refuse to hide, from being killed by his rivals. Hikaru Gosunkugi finds Ranma and unties him. Puzzled, Ranma asks, "Aren't you one of the guys with a grudge against me?" Hikaru replies, "Who, me?" He then shoves Ranma out the door, saying, "No. I'll just wait until the others are finished." The others turn out to be Principal Kuno, Mousse and Tatewaki, who proceed to beat up on Ranma, but also get in each others way preventing any overly serious blow from landing.

Just as they are about to all strike at once, they are all knocked away. By Ryoga. Ranma says, "What ... you're saving me for yourself?" Ryoga replies, "Don't insult me! I can't stand people who pick on the weak!" Ranma is quite upset on hearing this, and attacks Ryoga, uselessly.

Akane visits Doctor Tofu, whose office looks like a disaster, covered in books and scrolls. He tells her that there is a chance of a cure, a chart in a remote hiding place which shows the moxibustion to counter the ultimate weakness moxibustion.

Ukyo finds Ranma. She tells him that she'll take care of him, that all he'll have to do for the rest of his life is watch over their children. She points out that in his weak state, he can't be the heir of the Tendo dojo, so his engagement to Akane has no point, leaving only his engagement to herself. Ranma, upset, says the only thing on his mind is getting his strength back, that he doesn't care about the dojo. Naturally, at that precise moment Akane had walked in behind him.

Akane hits Ranma over the head, telling him that she came to tell him about a possible cure, but just see if she'll tell him now. Ranma proceeds to fawn all over Akane, massaging her shoulders, etc., while she repeats, "I'm not telling." Ukyo looks on in disbelief at his antics.

Thoughts on MV 25

Warning: the below might be considered to contain some mild spoilers. Although I don't really give anything away.

I haven't started writing the new chapter yet. In fact, I had to spend all day today (Saturday) putting in overtime at the office. But I have been doing some thinking about the upcoming chapter.

I think this one is going to be mostly filler, where I show the new status quo has been established. Ryoga will continue to exert his control. The other guys will endeavor to make sure that Akane and Ranma know that they're still going to be making intensive use of the pair. There probably won't be anything special with Gosunkugi in this chapter. The main development will be primarily nonsexual, as Ranma and Akane begin the martial arts training of Hiroshi and Daisuke. But maybe I'll tie that into some sex.

I don't expect Ukyo to show up yet in this next chapter. She's on her way back to Nerima, but I'll want to devote significant attention to her return, not just toss it in with all of that other stuff. For that matter, it might be worthwhile to do another scene with Akane and Ranma in Ukyo's apartment, to further establish that they have been using it as a retreat / playroom in her absence.

Longer term, there will be some additional surprises before the next school term starts. I'll have to do something with the New Year. The start of the school term should be interesting. Akane's next monthly doctor's visit isn't scheduled to take place until after school starts up again.

Ryoga Keeping Ranma Male

T H Tiger, review of chapter 24, extract:
I do have a quibble, it's wholly because of my bias and likely not shared by everyone. It was Ryouga keeping Ranma male, and actually getting him to steer Ryouga into Akane. A mervelous bit of nasty on Ryouga's part, but I can't help but think he would be uncomfortable as hell with a guy handling his junk. In my own mind he just covered well and really ground Ranma's nose in the dirt at the same time. For my preference I'd just as well prefer it if Ranma were not male during these little sessions.

I think it is quite reasonable to assume that Ryoga was uncomfortable with having Ranma's hand on his manhood, if for no other reason his memories of what Ranma was like before he became weak. I mean, would you really be comfortable having a guy take hold of your prick when he hates your guts, and you can remember a time when he could lift and toss boulders around? So as THTiger suggested, I think Ryoga did feel that way, but suppressed any expression of his discomfort for the sake of carrying out this piece of nastiness.

I won't promise not to have Ranma male again during future sessions, but I believe that if I do it will be a fairly rare occurrence.