I just read Kazuma's review of chapter 27:
I've been keeping up with the story since it started, but i really got to say that the idea of adding Ukyo to the equation is a terrible idea. would of prefer that you killed her off, but then i just hated Ukyo in a general since since she was first introduced in the manga. I look forward to what you plan on doing but I have ideas and not too fond of 'em.
Everyone has their own tastes in characters of course. For each reader, only time will tell whether what I do with the character will be interesting or not. For what it's worth, I don't expect Ukyo to become as much a main character as, say, either Ryoga or Gosunkugi. Still, she will be around.
The real reason I'm making this post in reply to the review is because of a fascinating coincidence. Immediately prior to reading this review, I was watching an episode of the anime Kaze no Stigma on Hulu. The male protagonist of that show is named ... wait for it ... Kazuma.
---My only suggestions would be to: A: have one of the two victims taunt Ukyo about how she's become Ryouga's fuck toy, and B: include her in the same fate as the other perverted bastards.
ReplyDeleteAbout their fates: Might I suggest some Powdered Spring of Drowned Girl Water, some lust enhancing pressure points, and a few bachelor parties. Since they seem to enjoy traumatizing Akane and Ranma, they can do the same back!
I've got some things in mind, but I don't want to turn Akane and Ranma into rapists who are just as bad as Michio and company.
ReplyDeleteI'm just glad you kept kodachi out of the story, every other fiancée I am okay with. Im fact Akane kinda pissed me off in the manga lol, I liked Ukyo and Shampoo better.
ReplyDeleteThat's like I said, we all have our own tastes. I should warn you, I haven't promised to keep Kodachi out of the story. She's presumably still there in Nerima. I can always choose to have her show up later. I don't have any specific plans for her at the moment, but that's subject to change.
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