Quoting a review for Greenery Day on AdultFanFiction:
Size does not matter to a degree considering location of nerves. Too large is usually too painful though, because hitting the cervix is not pleasant from what I have read in medical journals. A number of guys have difficulty controlling themselves especially in climax so the ones who are too large can hurt a girl and leave a bad impression. If it was the girl’s first time it is far from impossible that she will develop trauma.
... the hell? Sir, are you aware that you were reading porn? You know, where it's not uncommon for authors to have men with baseball bat sized dicks screwing virgins and have them screaming in delight? Or was the problem that I only made him bigger than average instead of being hung like The Incredible Hulk, and therefore you expected something realistic to the point it could be printed in a medical journal?
I'm shaking my head over somebody worrying about details like this while reading such a story, instead of fapping like a normal person.
lol I didn't read it. /shakeshead
ReplyDeleteWhy did the reviewer asked why Ranma can turn in a girl when he splashed with water?
Bad enough when they make such comments about a simple porn story, but this is based on a story where there have been characters who could swallow a turkey whole, and mouth a watermelon.
ReplyDeleteThe entire series features over the top physical slap stick. You're action is actually rather mild compared to what it might be if you kept to the level of exaggeration that was used in the source material.
Ummm...yeah, that's a thing. Not a thing I want to read about in my porn, but it's a thing. Yep. Moving on.
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