Tuesday, July 26, 2016

Nabiki Reversed, Part 1

Part 1 of a scene based on the Reversal Jewel arc in the manga, found in VIZ translation volume 20, chapters 7 to 10, and most specifically chapter 10. Alternatively, this was volume 22 chapter 10 in the original Japanese volumes, or chapter 233 out of 407 in the overall chapter count. In canon, it was pretty much as depicted at the beginning of the scene below, except that Cologne managed to take the jewel off of Akane shortly after she noticed it. Akane forgot why she was at the Nekohanten, Ranma said something about Akane loving him so much, and she punched him through the ceiling.



Ranma knelt beside Shampoo in the Nekohanten, sweating and nervous in his formal attire. It was supposed to be easy. For some reason Shampoo had stopped pursuing him, instead expressing disgust and even hatred toward him. His ego could not handle this. In order to set the world right again, and restore Shampoo's devotion toward him, all he had to do was to tell her that he loved her. Then she would say it back, he could take a deep breath, and he could forget that all of this had happened.

For the third time he tried. “Shampoo. I'm only going to say this once. I ... I l-... I l-... Um. I-I-I er ...”

“I love you!”

Ranma stared at the girl who had popped up in front of him. Akane. Beaming at him with her eyes shining in a way he had never seen. Her face absolutely glowing. A smile on her lips which pierced his heart with its beauty. And to his shock she was saying ...

“I love you so much!”

Of course his shock was as nothing compared to Shampoo's, from where she was sitting now behind Akane. The purple-haired Amazon's mouth was comically agape.

All around them students of Furinkan High School jumped out, appearing from their hiding places under the tables. Corks popped out of champagne bottles. A multitude of voices cried simultaneously, “Congratulations!”

And if those students had been expecting to congratulate Ranma for saying those words to Shampoo, instead of Akane saying them to Ranma, well ... they'd been waiting under those tables for over an hour already.

Ranma looked around himself in bewilderment, wondering what was going on. He realized that all of these classmates had just heard Akane publicly declaring her love for him. He swallowed heavily, realizing how narrow an escape he'd just had. If he'd managed to say what he intended, then all of these people would have heard him proclaiming a love for Shampoo, a claim he had intended to keep very private and secret, since he was only doing so to restore the status quo.

At the same time Akane was also looking around, except she was still smiling. “Oh, you all heard me?! I'm so happy!” She pressed her head against Ranma's chest under his chin.

Shampoo's shock now metamorphosed into a scowl. She shouted, “No! Shampoo love Ranma! I mean ... oops.” She buried her face in her hands, realizing how she'd just screwed up. It was Ranma who was supposed to admit his love for her. Now that she had said the words, there was no way that he would do so himself.

Off to the side the surprised Cologne finally realized what had happened. She could see the Reversal Jewel on the front of the Tendo girl's uniform, in the right-side up position, allowing her buried love for Ranma to shine forth in abundance. Mousse must have had the jewel somewhere on his person, and put it on the girl in order to disrupt their plans.

The old woman sighed. Yet another good idea ruined. Sometimes she despaired that she would ever get the son-in-law back to China and married to her great-granddaughter. Well, she might as well retrieve the jewel. She hopped toward the couple.

Except that Akane chose that moment to stand, pulling Ranma to his feet as well. “Come on, Ranma,” she said to him enthusiastically. “This is nice and all, but there are much better things we could be doing right now!” With that she dragged him out the door, the jewel still attached to her uniform.

Cologne made to follow them, but at that moment was glomped by a sobbing Shampoo. “Great-grandmother!” the girl wept. “Shampoo fail! Airen no say he love Shampoo!”

Cologne tried to comfort the poor girl, while watching the other two teenagers disappear down the street. Well, a few more declarations of love from Akane to Ranma wouldn't make that much difference, given how clueless the boy was. She could wait a couple of hours to go and recover the jewel. Best see to Shampoo first.



Akane pulled Ranma into the Tendo home, straight up the stairs, and into her bedroom. She closed the door behind them, then spun around, threw her arms around her fiancé, and gave him a passionate kiss. This succeeded in frying his brain so thoroughly, that he simply stood there staring blankly as Akane began tugging off her school uniform.

Akane had only pulled off her jumper when she looked over and noticed the foolish boy was merely standing there, doing nothing. With a huff she went over and tugged off his jacket, then undid his slacks. Sitting him down on the bed, she pulled off the pants and then his boxers. Whatever was going on in his conscious mind, it obviously wasn't affecting his subconscious as his cock was standing proud and mighty, waiting for action.

The girl licked her lips, staring at the rigid male member. The jewel attached to the front of her shirt was practically glowing, and she couldn't wait to get that thing inside of her in order to fully express her love for the goofball. Disdaining to waste time on the removal of any more clothing, she tore the panties off of her hips, shoved Ranma down onto his back on the bed, then climbed onto the bed herself, straddling him.

Her juices were already flowing like a river. Akane reached beneath herself to grab hold of the stiff pole, positioned it at her opening, then spread her knees and dropped, impaling herself. There was a moment of intense pain as the useless barrier was torn away, but this was soon swept away by the overpowering feelings of love and pleasure which filled her. She began bouncing up and down eagerly, enthralled with how full a cock in her pussy could make her feel.

When his staff was enshrined in that tight, moist holy land, Ranma finally woke up. Except he was certain he was not awake, that he must be hallucinating. After all, there could be no other possible explanation why Akane would be fucking him. She was riding him like a wild cowgirl, and that was just so very not-Akane. But it was a wonderful dream, or hallucination, or whatever, so he might as well enjoy it while it lasted.

After several minutes Akane let out a loud yell while bucking up and down at high speed, her pussy clenching and unclenching with the waves of climax rolling through her. This proved too much for Ranma and he thrust upward, filling her insides with thick cream, keeping his back arched for several long seconds before dropping back to the bed.

Except his dick remained hard, and Akane was still fully seated atop it. With a grin she started slowly moving up and down again, figuring there was no reason to let a good hard on go to waste. Ranma was a bit unsure about this at first, but after she slid up and down his pole a couple of times it started feeling pretty good again, so he was more than willing to go along.

Akane decided the rest of her clothes had to go though. She unbuttoned her shirt, undid the front clasp of her bra, and pulled them off of her arms at the same time. She tossed them out to the side, where they landed near the door.

At that moment, Akane's eyes opened wide. She looked down in shock. What the hell was she doing! She ... she and Ranma ... were ... doing it! They were having sex! How did that happen?

Akane probably would have screamed and pummeled her new lover, except that it felt far too damned gloriously great! She hadn't even stopped moving up and down, and those movements were sending flashes of ecstasy along her nerves and straight to the pleasure centers of her brain. Through something like a fog she realized that she was the one on top of Ranma, and was thus the one exercising control over the situation, rather than the jerk below her. And besides, if she stood up then the jerk's cock would be pulled out of her, and there was no way she was letting that happen given how fabulous it was making her feel.

She could beat him up later for doing this. Right now there was fucking to do.



Everyone else had been out of the house when Akane and Ranma arrived home. Nabiki had naturally been over at the Nekohanten, waiting to collect on bets regarding Ranma's expected declaration of love. She had followed the two home, though rather more slowly, while trying to figure out what had gotten into her sister Akane. Nabiki was well aware that her sister loved the jock, but never expected to hear her admit it. Not any time soon at least.

She pulled off her shoes upon entering, then headed up to her bedroom. Wherever her sister and Ranma were, Nabiki had no interest in being there, not if they were engaging in any more sugary romance talk. She walked into her bedroom and was changing into normal after school attire when she heard a yell next door. A yell, from Akane's bedroom, which had a distinctly animal sound to it.

Unhurriedly, Nabiki finished dressing, then picked up her camera. Stepping down the hall, she quietly eased open the door to Akane's room. Then she stared, flabbergasted, watching Ranma's cock slide in and out of her sister as Akane moved up and down like a piston atop him. It took her several seconds to remember the camera in her hand, and she almost forgot to turn off the flash before taking several photographs.

Damn, but she was going to make a mint of money selling these pictures!

At that point Nabiki saw the jewel attached to the front of Akane's shirt, which was crumpled up on the floor in front of the door. Habitually inclined to borrow her sister's things, Nabiki picked the shirt up off the floor and detached the jewel. Admiring the pretty ornament for a moment, she attached it to the bottom of the necklace hanging around her neck. The diamonds inlaid in the jade surface made an arc curving downward at the bottom.

(To be continued ...)

5 comments:

  1. Nabiki never put the Reversal Jewel on in canon, did she? That's much more interesting than Akane putting it on. Other good candidates would be Nodoka, Ms. Hinako and Ranma himself/herself.

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  2. The only two people to wear the jewel in canon were Shampoo and Akane.

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  3. So what, Nabiki's going to donate all her money to charity and take a vow of poverty?

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  4. I hope I can come up with something more interesting than that.

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  5. Haha! That was funny! I think that's the only way that Ranma and Akane could get laid.

    Now I'm really curious to know what is going to happen with Nabiki. I can wait to read.

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