Sunday, October 24, 2010

Working on 25

I did a little work on chapter 25 tonight. Not much, but it's a start. Mostly what I did was to go over the first scene I had written months ago and make some revisions. I did add some more afterward. I'm hoping that I'm about a quarter of the way through the chapter, based on what I plan for it to include. Now I just need to pray that I can keep working at it. At least I can say that I did something, which at the moment seems like a pretty significant milestone.

9 comments:

  1. That's a very good news, hurrah! Good luck

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  2. I'm hoping in the next chapter Ranma gets some kind of revenge ^.^

    Your stories are amazingly hot, but they are hard to read if you watch the anime. Your stories make me hate Ryoga. Please let there be revenge O.O

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  3. While I intend some revenge eventually, don't expect it anytime soon. Also, try to remember that Ryoga isn't really himself right now. The real Ryoga is the one who held Ranma and comforted her before Happosai hit those pressure points.

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  4. Alright man, but I just wanna read about Ryoga getting butt fucked and chopped into little pieces at this point lol (but your the author and your very good at what your doing, so no matter what you write I'm gunna read).

    And I've kinda set my mind think of the Ranma from your stories, and the one in the anime as separate people. So keep writing :P

    PS- Thanks for responding so promptly ^.^

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  5. Oh, I make no pretense that the characterizations in the story are canonical. I'm writing erotica (or, more bluntly, pornography) and the characters need to behave in a manner appropriate thereto. So definitely it helps to think of these as a separate version of the characters.

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  6. Yea, its just hard sometimes, but Im getting it down.

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  7. Is there a prequel to this story? Chapter one talked about Ranma being weakened somehow. I am not sure if I missed something, or if it is something that will be explained later.

    I got to it through asstr.org, if that means anything...

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  8. The prequel, if you wish to call it that, is in the Ranma 1/2 manga itself. The "ultimate weakness moxibustion" is featured in the story arc which spans from chapter 6 of volume 11 to chapter 6 of volume 12 (in the English translation by VIZ).

    Of course, in the manga they found the final piece of the chart stuck to Happosai's head at the end, and Ranma's strength was restored. This story is a divergence from the canon, based on the "what if" of supposing that the final piece was not discovered (until Happosai found it himself), and that the rest of the chart was discarded and discovered by a character I made up, by the name of Michio.

    I suppose it might be worthwhile if I were to post a summary of that story arc, for the benefit of those who are not familiar with the story. (A brief summary of the manga as a whole is on my web site at AssTR.)

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  9. O alright I get it now. A summary would help, or just a quick mentioning of the "prequel." Still I am sure your stories get the most traffic from people familiar with Ranma 1/2.

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