It has been privately suggested that I consider having the molesters force Ranma and Akane to be pierced, as this provides possibilities for BDSM play. I thought I'd let everyone know now that this isn't going to happen, for the simple reason that I personally regard piercing as a turn off.
Please note, this is a personal taste. I have no problem with other people liking it, or liking to read about it, or having it done themselves. But as the author of the story, given that writing about it would have a negative effect on my libido, it's not going to be showing up.
Sorry 'bout that (for those of you who would have enjoyed it).
---I can understand your thing about nipple piercing, though I do hope that your turn off doesn't encompass nipple clips (call me perverted, but I can see a potential scene involving Ranma and Akane being clipped to each other (bonus points involve clit clamping to each other).
ReplyDeleteWhile on the topic of BDSM, how about a little more personal bondage? Both girls have been hung and tied in place, but what about breast bondage, or a some questionable placement of ropes in other sensitive areas? Midnight 'walking', maybe, involving a leash and collar system?
If I'm going too far in the extreme, then I apologize, but simple gangbang and humiliation tactics get old after a while,
By the way, I did happen to like the strap-on scene, though you should have focused a little more on what was going on in Ranma's head. She was accepting a phallic object into herself; it should have been a little more conflicting for her.
Happy writing, and update soon!
Ranma's had a lot of phallic objects in herself by now, but yes, perhaps I should have.
ReplyDeleteI don't have any problem with clips, clamps, etc., and in fact I believe there was an earlier scene in which Gos put clothespins on Akane's nipples. I will probably do more with that at some point.
---The thing about those phallic objects is that they were of men, men who she has come to hate and despise. Akane, though, is the girl she loves. Akane, sticking a strap-on into her and fucking her like a man should have more mental conflict involved. An actual dropping of the mental and emotional defenses, so to speak.
ReplyDeletePlease do. The whole 'clipped to each other' thing is an idea that interests me, and I can see using that to force both girls into doing things that could increase their humiliation and discomfort by trying to ease the pain of the other.
That, and a bit of weight play could just spread things around equally.
Yes, I concede. I should have gone into Ranma's thought processes during the strap-on scene. I'll try to do better in future. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty certain that I'll do more stuff with clips/clamps/etc., and with weights attached thereto. I'll try to remember the desire to have Ranma and Akane clipped to one another.
After reading, once again, your last chapter, I saw your comment at the end and wanted to visit your blog. First I want to say very good job for this Ranma erotic fanfiction. It's one of my favorite! I was glad to see a new chapter. I really like it, very well done and very exciting!
ReplyDeleteI agree gangbang and humiliation tactics get old after a while, but still enjoyable! With Ukyo, I can see a new character gonna be involved, that's cool!
Can't wait for the next chapter: the gang waits its turn after what they learn, Ukyo is coming, etc.
I wanted to suggest you a Ranma dojinshi, named "Irie File Red". I may give you some new ideas?! Enjoy ;) (it's all in Japanese, couldn't find English version. Also, I guess we pretty well understand what they are doing! LOL)
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/117154/78d7775e66/
PS: I hope "Playing with Ranma", which is also one of my favorite fanfiction, will get update soon! I guess you've already read it? There are interesting ideas in it as well (Akane humiliation, gold shower with Ukyo and Akane etc.)
Good luck ;)
Argh. Just lost my long comment. I'll try to synopsize.
ReplyDelete1. Thanks for pointing me to Irie File Red. I hadn't noticed that one on e-hentai yet.
2. I've seen Playing With Ranma on mediaminer. Glanced at it, but chose not to read. I think it's because the "Ranma willingly screws everyone" sort of story is not greatly appealing to me.
3. I'm glad to hear that the humiliation tactics remain enjoyable. That's a big thing with me, and will remain a major part of the story.